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Can I get some proof readers?
MnJohnnie

Posted on 03/24/2020 4:08:14 PM PDT by MNJohnnie

I don't normally discuss politics with most of you because it just upsets half the people I know. Many of you are going to be very upset with me for this. That is fine because it more important that you hear the truth then like me. What is going on in DC right now is incredibly dangerous. The level of out and out lying by US House Democrats about their objections to the Virus Relief bill is incredible. There IS no "$500 billion slush" fund, no "bailing out the rich at the expense of the workers" Those are marketing slogans designed to gin up an emotional response from you and conceal the truth. Corporations employ 10s of millions of people. Corporations are everything from your local Mom @ Pa gas station down the street to massive operations like Ford or Delta Airlines. Corporations have debt they have to play just like people. When they build a new store or plant, they borrow money to finance the capital expense. Those payments still have to be made even thought the Government shut them down or put a lock down on their customers. Here is an example. I work for a Food Manufacturing corporation that employs about 5,000 people nation wide. Due to the loss of business from the slow down, they just cut all Executive and Sr Management salaries 20%. If this goes one 2 more weeks, they will cut middle management salaries, if it goes on a month they have to cut all salaries. After that they start laying off worker bees like me and shutting down production lines. Why? Because they have to have the money to make their debt payments now and hope they can make it up to employees later. We are an Essential Business not shut down like the Airlines or the Car companies. The US, and the World, are on the brink of a financial crisis like nothing seen since the 1930s. People have got to stop playing politics and start taking this very seriously What the US House Democrats are currently doing is enormously dangerous to our future. It will not take much to trigger a massive credit crunch like what happened in 1929.. All the various things US House Democrats want to put in the Virus Relief bill have NOTHING at all to do with the fighting the economic effects of the Virus. Not one thing the Democrats want to add will help ordinary Americans one bit in this time of crisis. Democrats are playing politics to get a political wish list rammed through into law simply because they think they have us held hostage. They believe that we will have no choice to but accept what they are trying to ram through They think they have us over a barrel and can do what ever they want. Remember that in Nov when you go to vote. You need to put down your partisan rationalization and excuses. You need to stop just habitual cheering for "your team" You need to stop manufacturing false moral equivalence about politics and actually pay close attention to what is going on right now in DC. Beware of who you vote for. Pay attention to how they are voting NOW, Do not just listen to what they say, or put in their ads, during election season. May God Bless you all,, Good Luck, Stay Safe.


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To: ZinGirl

Agreed! I spit on my palm to seal the promise.......


41 posted on 03/24/2020 4:35:35 PM PDT by Hot Tabasco (I went to China and all I got was a cheap face mask and a cold)
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To: MNJohnnie

Those payments still have to be made even thought....though


42 posted on 03/24/2020 4:36:08 PM PDT by goodnesswins (Trump is as good a dictator as he is a racist.....)
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To: MNJohnnie

than not then is commonly confused.


43 posted on 03/24/2020 4:36:42 PM PDT by chalkfarmer
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To: Hot Tabasco

Good LORD...spitting? Even internet spitting can totally infect approximately 9,000,000 people. Luckily, I have sprayed my phone. But be careful.


44 posted on 03/24/2020 4:38:21 PM PDT by ZinGirl (Now a grandma ....can't afford a tagline :))
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To: MNJohnnie

Sent you a FReep mail.


45 posted on 03/24/2020 4:42:03 PM PDT by PistolPaknMama
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To: ken in texas

LOl that is very good


46 posted on 03/24/2020 4:43:12 PM PDT by MNJohnnie (They would have abandon leftism to achieve sanity. Freeper Olog-hai)
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To: MNJohnnie

Much better. Good post.


47 posted on 03/24/2020 4:43:31 PM PDT by Rusty0604 (2020 four more years!)
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To: Texas Eagle

Thank you


48 posted on 03/24/2020 4:43:36 PM PDT by MNJohnnie (They would have abandon leftism to achieve sanity. Freeper Olog-hai)
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To: MNJohnnie
Can I get some proof readers?

I think that you mean "May I get some proofreaders?"

:-)
49 posted on 03/24/2020 4:56:57 PM PDT by Engraved-on-His-hands
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To: Engraved-on-His-hands

Learning more and more with every post. Thank you


50 posted on 03/24/2020 4:59:07 PM PDT by MNJohnnie (They would have abandon leftism to achieve sanity. Freeper Olog-hai)
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To: Menehune56

Ditto dat!!


51 posted on 03/24/2020 5:00:55 PM PDT by Osage Orange (uee)
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To: MNJohnnie; Jamestown1630

If they’re too lazy to insert a few paragraph breaks then it’s certainly not our job to fix it for them.


52 posted on 03/24/2020 5:03:54 PM PDT by Bullish (Covfefe Happens)
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To: MNJohnnie

“That is fine because it more important that you hear the truth then like me.”

That is fine because it more important that you hear the truth.


53 posted on 03/24/2020 5:03:54 PM PDT by SgtHooper (If you remember the 60's, YOU WEREN'T THERE!)
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To: MNJohnnie
We are an Essential Business not shut down like the Airlines or the Car companies.

Rewrite this. I can't tell if you are saying that airlines snd car companies are essential or not.

Mom and Pa gas station

Generally you would say "mom and pop" when talking about small businesses.

Also dump most of the mid-sentence capital letters unless they are proper nouns. Vee are not here German Speaking. :-) And most of the abbreviations need to be expanded like Sr and Nov.

54 posted on 03/24/2020 5:05:48 PM PDT by KarlInOhio (Newton invented calculus when the plague shut down Cambridge. What will you do with your time off?)
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To: Harmless Teddy Bear
A good rule of thumb is any number that you have to add letters to should be written out.

Awesome rule. What about eras/dates EG 1980's ?

Is Nineteen Eighties clearer?

Just being a smarty-pants.

55 posted on 03/24/2020 5:06:28 PM PDT by Don W (When blacks riot, neighbourhoods and cities burn. When whites riot, nations and continents burn.)
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To: Bullish

Oh good grief. He was humble enough to recognize his own possible weaknesses in this area, and ask for help - and that’s a virtue.

He also managed to get a lot of attention to his post :-)


56 posted on 03/24/2020 5:11:29 PM PDT by Jamestown1630 ("A Republic, if you can keep it.")
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To: Don W
Actually you should eliminate the Nineteen all together. So it would just be "the Eighties".

You could also give a date range (IE from January 20, 1981 - January 20, 1989 was known as the Reagan Era)

But as a general rule of thumb you should not mix numbers and letters.

As with any general rule there might be exceptions.

57 posted on 03/24/2020 5:23:14 PM PDT by Harmless Teddy Bear (Leave it to me to be holdin' the matches when the fire truck shows up & there's nobody else to blame)
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To: MNJohnnie

Not bad, but it is wordy. Revise for brevity. Good luck with this may God speed your words to their hearts!


58 posted on 03/24/2020 6:12:34 PM PDT by BDParrish ( Please correct me! I never learned anything from anybody who already agreed with me.)
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To: MNJohnnie; pnut22; Menehune56
Paragraphs help get people to a) read and b) focus... Each new major thought or idea you discuss should, IMHO, become its own paragraph...

In addition, as a test of how far your readers are actually getting through your thesis, every now and then include something like a sentence or two on an unrelated subject like Higgs bundles, the Hitchin moduli space, or Poisson geometry...{:-) Then you just count the Whiskey Tango Foxtrot replies both overall and per reader...

59 posted on 03/24/2020 6:29:30 PM PDT by SuperLuminal (Where is Sam Adams now that we desperately need him)
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To: MNJohnnie

Glad to help in a small way. :)


60 posted on 03/24/2020 6:46:15 PM PDT by Redcitizen (Nobody needs a 10 round magazine. You need a 30 round magazine.)
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