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Monsters and the Weak (Ode to America's military)
E-mail ^ | 1/25/06 | Michael Marks

Posted on 03/10/2006 4:33:22 AM PST by Coop

The sun beat like a hammer, not a cloud was in the sky. The mid-day air ran thick with dust, my throat was parched and dry. With microphone clutched tight in hand and cameraman in tow, I ducked beneath a fallen roof, surprised to hear "stay low."

My eyes blinked several times before in shadow I could see, the figure stretched across the rubble, steps away from me. He wore a cloak of burlap strips, all shades of grey and brown, that hung in tatters till he seemed to melt into the ground.

He never turned his head or took his eye from off the scope, but pointed through the broken wall and down the rocky slope. "About eight hundred yards," he said, his whispered words concise, "beneath the baggy jacket he is wearing a device."

A chill ran up my spine despite the swelter of the heat, "You think he's gonna set it off along the crowded street?" The sniper gave a weary sigh and said "I wouldn't doubt it," "unless there's something this old gun and I can do about it."

A thunderclap, a tongue of flame, the still abruptly shattered; while citizens that walked the street were just as quickly scattered. Till only one remained, a body crumpled on the ground, The threat to oh so many ended by a single round.

And yet the sniper had no cheer, no hint of any gloat, instead he pulled a logbook out and quietly he wrote. "Hey, I could put you on TV, that shot was quite a story!" But he surprised me once again -- "I got no wish for glory."

"Are you for real?" I asked in awe, "You don't want fame or credit?" He looked at me with saddened eyes and said "you just don't get it." "You see that shot-up length of wall, the one without a door? before a mortar hit, it used to be a grocery store."

"But don't go thinking that to bomb a store is all that cruel, the rubble just across the street -- it used to be a school. The little kids played soccer in the field out by the road," His head hung low, "They never thought a car would just explode."

"As bad as all this is though, it could be a whole lot worse," He swallowed hard, the words came from his mouth just like a curse. "Today the fight's on foreign land, on streets that aren't my own," "I'm here today 'cause if I fail, the next fight's back at home."

"And I won't let my Safeway burn, my neighbors dead inside, don't wanna get a call from school that says my daughter died; I pray that not a one of them will know the things I see, nor have the work of terrorists etched in their memory."

"So you can keep your trophies and your fleeting bit of fame, I don't care if I make the news, or if they speak my name." He glanced toward the camera and his brow began to knot, "If you're looking for a story, why not give this one a shot."

"Just tell the truth of what you see, without the slant or spin; that most of us are OK and we're coming home again. And why not tell our folks back home about the good we've done, how when they see Americans, the kids come at a run."

You tell 'em what it means to folks here just to speak their mind, without the fear that tyranny is just a step behind; Describe the desert miles they walk in their first chance to vote, or ask a soldier if he's proud, I'm sure you'll get a quote."

He turned and slid the rifle in a drag bag thickly padded, then looked again with eyes of steel as quietly he added; "And maybe just remind the few, if ill of us they speak, that we are all that stands between the monsters and the weak."

Michael Marks
January 25, 2006


TOPICS: Miscellaneous; War on Terror; Your Opinion/Questions
KEYWORDS: military; monsters; soldiers; terrorism; troopssupport; weak
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To: StarCMC

Maybe we'll both do it! I may not enjoy it as much, but I have no problems hugging men. You've apparently never witnessed men at a sporting event. ;-)


41 posted on 03/10/2006 11:27:23 AM PST by Coop (FR= a lotta talk, but little action - now do you know what my tagline means?!?)
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Oops, I've dad it again(Britney Spears pregnant again)
Posted by Angus MacGregor
On General/Chat 03/10/2006 12:45:42 PM EST · 43 replies · 701+ views

Approaching the two-hour mark...

42 posted on 03/10/2006 11:32:32 AM PST by Coop (FR= a lotta talk, but little action - now do you know what my tagline means?!?)
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To: Coop
You've apparently never witnessed men at a sporting event.

Well...ok...swat him on the tush then -- that seems to be the male symbol of "I'm with ya!" in baseball anyway. Of course, if I was there in person it would probably NOT be appropriate! LMBO!!!

43 posted on 03/10/2006 11:33:08 AM PST by StarCMC (Old Sarge is my hero...doing it right in Iraq! Vaya con Dios, Sarge.)
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To: Eaker

Naaah... Not great poem. FANTASTIC poem!
Thanks for the ping.


44 posted on 03/10/2006 2:19:48 PM PST by Humidston (Democrats = Elitists who want to control everyone else's business.)
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To: StarCMC
Oops, I've dad it again(Britney Spears pregnant again)
Posted by Angus MacGregor
On General/Chat 03/10/2006 12:45:42 PM EST · 50 replies · 867+ views

Monsters and the Weak (Ode to America's military)
Posted by Coop
On News/Activism 03/10/2006 7:33:22 AM EST · 43 replies · 517+ views

FR has some wonderful people on it, but overall this forum is pretty pathetic.

45 posted on 03/12/2006 1:00:43 PM PST by Coop (FR= a lotta talk, but little action - now do you know what my tagline means?!?)
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To: Coop

Honestly? I'm surprised it's this close.

BTW -- how's Eddie??


46 posted on 03/12/2006 1:19:44 PM PST by StarCMC (Old Sarge is my hero...doing it right in Iraq! Vaya con Dios, Sarge.)
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To: Coop

Did you post this on the Britney thread?

If not then please do.


47 posted on 03/12/2006 6:39:26 PM PST by Eaker (My Wife Rocks! - There's no problem on the inside of a person that the outside of a dog can't cure.)
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To: StarCMC

He's doing well. He received your package (along with another and some cards) on Friday, and we spent an enjoyable couple of hours. Driving out, Eddie (with no mention at all from me) rolled down his window to thank one of the troop supporters (didn't see who it was) for being out there.


48 posted on 03/13/2006 3:57:02 AM PST by Coop (FR= a lotta talk, but little action - now do you know what my tagline means?!?)
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To: boxerblues

A don't-know-why-I'm-wasting-my-time bump.


49 posted on 03/17/2006 6:24:09 AM PST by Coop (FR= a lotta talk, but little action)
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To: Coop

okay Im confused lol and I havent even started with the green beer yet


50 posted on 03/17/2006 6:31:47 AM PST by boxerblues
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To: boxerblues

Sorry. It's a theme throughout this thread. FReepers tend to ignore pro-troop/military threads, but flock to gossip and "babe" threads. So the bump was, in essence, wasting my time. But I still do it in the hopes someone out there sees it for the first time.


51 posted on 03/17/2006 6:36:31 AM PST by Coop (FR= a lotta talk, but little action)
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To: Coop

God bless the American soldier and their noble mission. And a curse on those who needlessly increase their peril.


52 posted on 03/17/2006 7:08:18 AM PST by Search4Truth (Rebellion to tyrants is obedience to God - Thomas Jefferson.)
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To: Coop
"As bad as all this is though, it could be a whole lot worse," He swallowed hard, the words came from his mouth just like a curse. "Today the fight's on foreign land, on streets that aren't my own," "I'm here today 'cause if I fail, the next fight's back at home."

This is so very true.

53 posted on 03/17/2006 7:42:54 AM PST by Jemian (He is no fool to give up what he cannot keep, in order to gain what he cannot lose. -Jim Elliot)
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To: Jemian

Indeed


54 posted on 03/17/2006 7:52:51 AM PST by Coop (FR= a lotta talk, but little action)
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To: Coop

Brittany who?


55 posted on 03/17/2006 8:07:51 AM PST by Jemian (He is no fool to give up what he cannot keep, in order to gain what he cannot lose. -Jim Elliot)
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To: Search4Truth
God bless the American soldier and their noble mission. And a curse on those who needlessly increase their peril.

Well said.

56 posted on 03/17/2006 8:22:02 AM PST by Coop (FR= a lotta talk, but little action)
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To: Coop

Coop, the msm are so used to untrue spin, they have no shame.


57 posted on 03/17/2006 10:29:13 AM PST by tillacum (i)
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To: Coop
Bttt.

5.56mm

58 posted on 03/17/2006 2:07:22 PM PST by M Kehoe
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To: M Kehoe

Thanks for the bump


59 posted on 03/17/2006 2:44:14 PM PST by Coop (FR= a lotta talk, but little action)
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To: Coop

May God bless our military!


60 posted on 03/17/2006 7:31:24 PM PST by kayak (Praying for MozartLover's son, Jemian's son, all our military, and our President every day!)
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