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Posted on 02/15/2008 6:36:15 PM PST by Soaring Feather
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Morning, tomkow!
Poem written for a story I’m working on:
I heard the seagulls,
I heard the seagulls crying
I heard them calling
as I walked the winding road,
Looking up I saw
White snow upon the mountain,
Tall the white mountain
The land of the cold country.
Beyond the mountain,
Past the cold country so white,
My love waits by night
By the seashore just for me.
My fascination for modified Japanese poetry forms evidently continues.
But I did write something, a retelling of part of the recent story in heroic couplets. I had to put in a twist at the end, cause I just couldn’t stand the thought of me writing something that formal without it being humorous:
Out of the blood red fog it came,
A scent, a memory, a cherished name
Piercing the spell-bound heart inside,
His aching soul that keened and cried
Over beloved blood he spilled,
Beloved one he thought he killed —
His grief did give the spider joy,
And left his form to be a toy.
And yet he knew that scent and voice —
A light within bloomed to rejoice,
The spider’s webs began to shred.
He heard her voice – she was not dead!
He caught her as she tumbled down,
The spectre lurched, began to frown.
How could he break the spider’s spell
That was to bring their souls to hell?
The lovers gazed there, eye to eye,
Red locked on gray, a soft-breathed sigh.
A sword would hold the spectre fast
As brother cut the cord at last
That would begin the spider’s doom
As bright pink light began to bloom —
A stubborn, black-haired little lass
For love would kick Naraku’s a$$.
Breaking news off Sky news alert getting bad in Seriba report that US Embassy workers are being evacuate after yesterday rioting and they place all US embassies in Eastern Europe on high alert
Do they need help evacuating any VODKA????
Why every time somebody happen in Eastern Europe you ask that Tomkow why that is
There is report off Interfax wire Top Russian General has found dead in his Moscow crib with bottle of vodka and his pistol next to him
Vlady at again? probably
Trust me Tomkow I don’t think Seria stationed Americans need your help on evacutate the Vodka now if was the Russians maybe
Greeting Lairites! Sorry that I haven’t been around to respond to many of the great posts especially those with pictures. My muse visited me one evening but escaped when some more work sailed over the transom. It has been very hectic the last 7 days. I thought that the light that I saw at the end of the tunnel would be the end of the crunch but to my surprise it was an on-coming train. Oh well! Hope that all are well.
Well well according to Ap wire look like SOuthern Methroist Univerisity going get President Bush presidential library despite the oppostion from Far left from that campus
Come think of it what their hoopla about it from Far Left if I am correct Laura went to that school Bush is being nice husband by giving his wife altma mater the presidential library he didn’t have do that
HELLO
“Do they need help evacuating any VODKA????”
No, but if you make it to my house, I have a bottle of Cognac and some fine cigars we could use up and swap lies and sea stories about interesting times and overbuilt ladies we have known or would like to know!!!!!
“Greeting Lairites! Sorry that I haven’t been around to respond to many of the great posts especially those with pictures. My muse visited me one evening but escaped when some more work sailed over the transom. It has been very hectic the last 7 days. I thought that the light that I saw at the end of the tunnel would be the end of the crunch but to my surprise it was an on-coming train. Oh well! Hope that all are well.”
Some points here we have to take in turn!
“My muse visited me one evening but escaped”
Now when my muse ‘visits’, I’m the one who can’t escape, so how do you work that???
“It has been very hectic the last 7 days.”
OK what were you doing, (Remember it took God six days to make the world, so he got a day off for good work. If its not up that standard, you likely were less creative, (especially with your muse escaping and all!)
“to my surprise it was an on-coming train.”
OUCH! What were you doing near tracks anyway? (I jest of course, I saw that train myself once and I was in a submarine at the time!)
Stop by, Tom and I are going to drink up the cognac and smoke my cigars, so I’ll keep a few aside for you, great way to get over those trains!!!)
Those tape figures ARE amazing. I’m curious about the process.
Breaking news from BBC wire report of Turkey claim that 20 of their soldiers 10 Iraqi Kurds are confirm dead over latest smackdown by Turkey over Northern Iraqi Kurdih rebels troops
What this obsession with Lard just asking
BTWWWW guess what I Found on YOU TUBE IN LIVING COLOR I do remember Jamie Foxx famous charcater Wanda LOLOLOL!
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aktPK28QFi8&feature=related
OH LORDY I remember this skit
NOw the woman with TommY Davidson in the beginning that Alexnanda Wentworth aka future Mrs George Stefanoipois
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WJBvo4YY0kA&feature=related
hehe sick!
Well that future Mrs George Stepfoanis that mess up part about it with Wanda in Basic instinct skit I kinda remember that
I meant re: Wanda.
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