"suspected body"?
Of course if it turns out to be the body of someone else the case just went from strange to plain weird.
According to early news reports the body was found in more than one trash bag. That may explain the odd wording.
... a 10-year-old girl whose suspected body was found "suspected body"? |
Fits right in with the "prowling pickup truck" line.
Jourbalists. Sinking lower and lower every day.
... a 10-year-old girl whose suspected body was found
“suspected body”?
My exact reaction...
Yes, that whole article reads like a first draft, some pretty clunky constructions in there.
Nina Golgowski, who wrote the article, did a poor job throughout...
in any case, how devastating, heartbreaking... the world has ended for the Owens family... and the couple that witnessed it--they will be replaying it all over again and again for a long time... especially Carlos Edwards...
Yes, and a “prowling pickup truck.”
<”suspected body”?
Yeah. That made me shake my head, too. Where do these people learn to write?