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A poem for all (I think that you have never got, A poem as lovely as this zot)
me | 09/24/2005 | Creeper, as told to Joyce Killmore-Trolles

Posted on 09/24/2005 11:23:20 AM PDT by creeperdavis

A poem


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To: tuliptree76

And, you sly VIXEN, you! You took the 1800!

Good for you!

LOL!


1,801 posted on 10/10/2005 9:38:10 PM PDT by Monkey Face (Do the voices in my head bother you?)
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To: Monkey Face

Just a K'nigget now. Not the V-word anymore.


1,802 posted on 10/10/2005 9:39:23 PM PDT by tuliptree76 (You can find me in the library reading tax books.)
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To: EsmeraldaA
"It is tricky and wonderful."

Thanks! That's me all right, very tricksy.

I'll make up a new word. I like to write "holographic" poems. You have to look at them from many angles.

For instance, a rainbow is a refraction image from a "curtain" of raindrops.

1,803 posted on 10/10/2005 9:40:42 PM PDT by NicknamedBob (George asked me for the best poet... I looked and looked ... I couldn't find anyone better than me.)
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To: NicknamedBob
Thanks for the explanation....

The lines have depth, that changed my mind and opinion. :o)
1,804 posted on 10/10/2005 9:46:02 PM PDT by EsmeraldaA
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To: tuliptree76

You may be a K'nigget in your own eyes, but there are those of us here who still see you as the Prime VIXEN.

But to avoid any future embarrassment, I'll leave off the original title...with apologies


1,805 posted on 10/10/2005 9:51:06 PM PDT by Monkey Face (Do the voices in my head bother you?)
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To: EsmeraldaA
"... that changed my mind and opinion."

Whoa!! Behold the power of Chee Poetry!

1,806 posted on 10/10/2005 9:51:11 PM PDT by NicknamedBob (George asked me for the best poet... I looked and looked ... I couldn't find anyone better than me.)
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To: Monkey Face

Thanks. I just want to let that go. It's not me.


1,807 posted on 10/10/2005 9:52:40 PM PDT by tuliptree76 (You can find me in the library reading tax books.)
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To: NicknamedBob

OK...make up a new word...I'm waiting with bated breath...

Be sure to give the definition. ;o]


1,808 posted on 10/10/2005 9:52:51 PM PDT by Monkey Face (Do the voices in my head bother you?)
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To: NicknamedBob
Ok. Here's the best I could do before nodding off:

Fists raised, you curse the dark.
Voices hoarse, you shout at the monsters about you.
Tears flow, to wash away the pain inflicted upon you.

But no one hears, except those with whom you are familiar
Reciting echoes from a past time, an invocation to hold at bay the forces about you.
Deep within, need and desire, to summon the power to banish those who haunt you.

You light the candle, and draw the magic circle,
You chants grow louder, your emotions in turmoil,
Silence falls as your eyes open to see fists raised against you,
Clear through the crystal of a looking glass.

1,809 posted on 10/10/2005 9:53:26 PM PDT by Tench_Coxe
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To: NicknamedBob


LOL!

1,810 posted on 10/10/2005 9:56:59 PM PDT by EsmeraldaA
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To: Tench_Coxe
"... your eyes open to see fists raised against you,
Clear through the crystal of a looking glass."

Awesome and powerful!

1,811 posted on 10/10/2005 9:57:05 PM PDT by NicknamedBob (George asked me for the best poet... I looked and looked ... I couldn't find anyone better than me.)
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To: tuliptree76

It's OK...

Some of us like to think of other days and other things. But ny liks ar seeled...

No nore Prine Vixen iss 'at is your wish, Ns Tree...wild horses can't get it out of ne...I pronise...


1,812 posted on 10/10/2005 9:57:30 PM PDT by Monkey Face (Do the voices in my head bother you?)
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To: Tench_Coxe

That was intense. :o)


1,813 posted on 10/10/2005 10:00:22 PM PDT by EsmeraldaA
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To: Monkey Face

Thanks.


1,814 posted on 10/10/2005 10:01:21 PM PDT by tuliptree76 (You can find me in the library reading tax books.)
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To: Tench_Coxe; NicknamedBob

That's extremely good, Tench!

I like it! I hope you will have more for us as time goes on. We have an intense liking for intense minds. ;o]


1,815 posted on 10/10/2005 10:03:14 PM PDT by Monkey Face (Do the voices in my head bother you?)
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To: Monkey Face
"OK...make up a new word...I'm waiting with bated breath... "

Preempturning -- That's when the guy behind you tries to take the exit you're heading for, before you can get there.

1,816 posted on 10/10/2005 10:03:24 PM PDT by NicknamedBob (George asked me for the best poet... I looked and looked ... I couldn't find anyone better than me.)
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To: tuliptree76

You're welcone, Ns Tree...:o]


1,817 posted on 10/10/2005 10:04:11 PM PDT by Monkey Face (Do the voices in my head bother you?)
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To: NicknamedBob

Well, it's a good word, but I have yet to see it in action...


1,818 posted on 10/10/2005 10:05:03 PM PDT by Monkey Face (Do the voices in my head bother you?)
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To: Monkey Face

It happens to me all the time.

Maybe the people in your part of the country are more polite. Try Boston.


1,819 posted on 10/10/2005 10:06:40 PM PDT by NicknamedBob (George asked me for the best poet... I looked and looked ... I couldn't find anyone better than me.)
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To: Monkey Face; Tench_Coxe; NicknamedBob; Darksheare
I'm off to read. (How shocking!)

Good night and sweet dreams everyone.
1,820 posted on 10/10/2005 10:08:08 PM PDT by EsmeraldaA
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