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To: Mama_Bear; DollyCali; LUV W; GodBlessUSA; JustAmy; tuliptree76; NicknamedBob; Marguerite; ...
Thanks, Mama_Bear:

I see my neighbors raking leaves
Often wondering if their brains have seives
Falling leaves is just part of God's Circle of Life
Certainly not made for lower lumbar aches with rakes

Leave them be, for Heaven's sake
They're made to decompose and fill your life with strife
A russet carpet above the soil
Replenishes it naturally, without sweat and toil

Raked piles of leaves, like winter Snow Men
Are for children a seasonal omen
That always bring an innocent, beauteous smile
So let the kids have at it and make a pile
So you may savor the moment all the while!

Jack Deth~ 09/21/05.

102 posted on 09/21/2005 10:09:04 AM PDT by Jack Deth (Knight Errant and Disemboweler of the WFTD Thread)
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To: Jack Deth

Beautiful poem.


106 posted on 09/21/2005 10:11:13 AM PDT by Mrs.Nooseman
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To: Jack Deth

great job.. always like when I find "your stuff" on FR..


109 posted on 09/21/2005 10:16:11 AM PDT by DollyCali (Don't tell GOD how big your storm is -- Tell the storm how B-I-G your s God is!)
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To: Jack Deth

Love your poem. We don't rake our leaves. It makes a perfect "blanket" for our St. Augustine grass over the winter months. Then, voila! They are gone by spring!


120 posted on 09/21/2005 10:37:37 AM PDT by luvie (The promise of faith is not the absence of suffering; it is the presence of grace..GWBush)
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To: Jack Deth
:) Great poem! I feel that lower lumbar ache just thinking about raking.
122 posted on 09/21/2005 11:05:40 AM PDT by GodBlessUSA (US Troops, past, present and future, God Bless You and Thank You! Prayers said for our Heroes!)
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To: Jack Deth

Jack, that was beautiful. Thanks.


129 posted on 09/21/2005 11:34:29 AM PDT by EsmeraldaA
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To: Jack Deth
Leave them be, for Heaven's sake
They're made to decompose and fill your life with strife
A russet carpet above the soil
Replenishes it naturally, without sweat and toil


I agree!

Another great poem. Thanks for helping us celebrate autumn, Jack. :-)

186 posted on 09/21/2005 4:29:45 PM PDT by Mama_Bear (If God brings you to it, He will bring you through it.)
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To: Jack Deth

Thank you for the poem, Jack.


194 posted on 09/21/2005 4:59:46 PM PDT by tuliptree76
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