Well...I think I have a solution, but it requires a full re-write. Dumping much of the amnesia story line and giving her a completely different backstory.
Guess I work from where I am forward and do the rewrite after the month of November.
Mmmm...rewrite. Better than just plain editing.
I have a question, should I go on ahead and decorate my cubicle for Christmas and should I use religious oriented ornements?
and listen to Christmas music at work?
Heh... full re-writes are always fun.
I still have flaws in my plot but I am charging ahead fully loaded.