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The Hobbit Hole XXIV - Sand and Stone and Pool and Dell...
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Posted on 08/24/2005 9:50:25 PM PDT by HairOfTheDog

Welcome to The Hobbit Hole!

Sand and Stone and Pool and Dell...

New verse:

Upon the hearth the fire is red,
Beneath the roof there is a bed;
But not yet weary are our feet,
Still round the corner we may meet
A sudden tree or standing stone
That none have seen but we alone.
Tree and flower and leaf and grass,
Let them pass! Let them pass!
Hill and water under sky,
Pass them by! Pass them by!

Still round the corner there may wait
A new road or a secret gate,
And though we pass them by today,
Tomorrow we may come this way
And take the hidden paths that run
Towards the Moon or to the Sun.
Apple, thorn, and nut and sloe,
Let them go! Let them go!
Sand and stone and pool and dell,
Fare you well! Fare you well!

Home is behind, the world ahead,
And there are many paths to tread
Through shadows to the edge of night,
Until the stars are all alight.
Then world behind and home ahead,
We’ll wander back to home and bed.
Mist and twilight, cloud and shade,
Away shall fade! Away shall fade!
Fire and lamp, and meat and bread,
And then to bed! And then to bed!

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To: Lil'freeper

How about seeing if you can slip in something about making NaNoWriMo one of this year's work achievement goals?


5,201 posted on 09/26/2005 9:03:56 AM PDT by JenB
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To: Lil'freeper; HairOfTheDog

The Hobbit Hole: Bacon of Restraint

5,202 posted on 09/26/2005 9:04:19 AM PDT by Corin Stormhands (You are stuck on stupid, I’m not going to answer that question ~ General Honore)
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To: Corin Stormhands

Mmmmmm.... bacon.


5,203 posted on 09/26/2005 9:12:51 AM PDT by Lil'freeper
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To: Corin Stormhands

What is it?


5,204 posted on 09/26/2005 9:15:10 AM PDT by Overtaxed
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To: JenB

Heh. I betcha they wouldn't notice. I could roll it into the personal development section to improve my writing skills. :P


5,205 posted on 09/26/2005 9:15:39 AM PDT by Lil'freeper
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To: Lil'freeper

I dare you...


5,206 posted on 09/26/2005 9:34:51 AM PDT by JenB
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To: JenB

It's bad enough that I'll be storyboarding while I'm on my next trip. :P


5,207 posted on 09/26/2005 9:37:16 AM PDT by Lil'freeper
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To: Lil'freeper

How is that bad? Good use of useless time.


5,208 posted on 09/26/2005 9:40:20 AM PDT by JenB
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To: JenB

Well, I won't be using my personal computing equipment...*grimace*


5,209 posted on 09/26/2005 9:48:57 AM PDT by Lil'freeper
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To: Lil'freeper

Bah!

I need to do more plotting myself. I don't have time this year to make mistakes...


5,210 posted on 09/26/2005 9:53:36 AM PDT by JenB
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To: Corin Stormhands

LOL!! He looks a little like my late m-i-l in that picture!


5,211 posted on 09/26/2005 9:58:04 AM PDT by SuziQ
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To: JenB

My brainstorm for storyboarding is going to use Excel. I'll use textboxes for each major plot point with different colors for the different story threads. Then I'll move them around like sticky notes until I like it.


5,212 posted on 09/26/2005 10:01:22 AM PDT by Lil'freeper
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To: Lil'freeper

That's a great idea!

I'd really like to figure out how I best plot. Then I could make a tool to help with it. Unforunately I can't get past step one.


5,213 posted on 09/26/2005 10:08:18 AM PDT by JenB
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To: JenB; Lil'freeper

I'm trying Nanowrimo again, but I'm going the stream of consciousness route...


5,214 posted on 09/26/2005 10:11:40 AM PDT by Corin Stormhands (You are stuck on stupid, I’m not going to answer that question ~ General Honore)
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To: Corin Stormhands

I go back and forth between plotted-to-death, skin-of-my-teeth, and something in between. This year is mostly in between but I'm just not happy yet with my plans.

Plus I probably have to do more research into art theft...


5,215 posted on 09/26/2005 10:13:39 AM PDT by JenB
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To: JenB

I've basically got my opening paragraph (edited for television viewing) and a few names. I'll see what happens.


5,216 posted on 09/26/2005 10:14:41 AM PDT by Corin Stormhands (You are stuck on stupid, I’m not going to answer that question ~ General Honore)
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To: JenB
I have a good beginning and ending. It's the middle that needs some work.

Details! Details!

5,217 posted on 09/26/2005 10:19:24 AM PDT by Lil'freeper
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To: Lil'freeper

Oh and the plan is still to destroy the world.


5,218 posted on 09/26/2005 10:19:53 AM PDT by Lil'freeper
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To: Lil'freeper; Corin Stormhands

I still don't have a plot. I have a pair of characters and a background I invented a couple years back that are just too fun not to revive. And a few more characters hanging around the sidelines who should get used. One of them wants to be a second viewpoint but I don't think I'll let him.

I have an idea for a good opener, I know what eventually happens to the characters (maybe not in this story though) but there's no story... I've only written them at short-story lengths but there's a novel in there somewhere.


5,219 posted on 09/26/2005 10:23:41 AM PDT by JenB
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To: JenB; Lil'freeper

Plot? What's that?


5,220 posted on 09/26/2005 10:25:42 AM PDT by Overtaxed
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