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To: EveningStar
Having read that, I'm sure many Freeper grammarians will rush to assist.
To: EveningStar
4 posted on
03/17/2005 3:57:12 PM PST by
Uri’el-2012
(Y'shua <==> YHvH is my Salvation (Psalm 118-14))
To: EveningStar
I'm not sure exactly what you're asking here... Yes, there are MANY examples of bad writing today, the use of "fluffy" transitions is only one, albeit good, example. Are you asking for advice on what words to use instead of those terms?
Now, having said that, my BA is in English, so I can help, but I need to you clarify your question.
[grin]
To: EveningStar
however
therefore
accordingly
as such
6 posted on
03/17/2005 3:58:50 PM PST by
So Cal Rocket
(Proud Member: Internet Pajama Wearers for Truth)
To: EveningStar
Here's another phrase that is not only overused but used incorrectly:
"Hopefully, somone will answer your question."
I know that's wrong, yet I often use the expression for want of an alternative.
To: EveningStar
8 posted on
03/17/2005 4:02:18 PM PST by
Redcloak
(There is no "I" in team. But then again, there is no "us" in it either. There is "meat" however.)
To: EveningStar
Well there is "subsequently," "as a result," and the like.
However, sometimes just launching into the next topic can be your start:
"One way to deal with the problem of liberals in higher education is by ignoring them. While I alluded to engagement of faculty in a previous example, one can..."
Or you could simply segue into the topic by shifting focus in more subtle ways:
"While it is true liberal faculty can be engaged in class, sometimes it is best to ignore them."
To: EveningStar
Do you speak well? If yes, write like you speak. The harder you have to think about HOW to do something, the harder it becomes to actually do it.
10 posted on
03/17/2005 4:03:29 PM PST by
Wolfstar
(If you can lead, do it. If you can't, follow. If you can't do either, become a Democrat.)
To: EveningStar
11 posted on
03/17/2005 4:03:43 PM PST by
Petronski
(If 'Judge' Greer can kill Terri, who will be next?)
To: EveningStar
I prefer to keep a separate pair of sunglasses.
That being the case and in any event, good luck...
15 posted on
03/17/2005 4:16:39 PM PST by
mikrofon
(Transitions)
To: EveningStar
If it feels good - do it;)
16 posted on
03/17/2005 4:25:48 PM PST by
sodpoodle
(sparrows are underrated)
To: EveningStar
My opinion.
All transitions are over used.
English is best when it is short and to the point. Simply illiminate transitions, you will only put a few back in during proof reading.
17 posted on
03/17/2005 4:34:13 PM PST by
SampleMan
("Yes I am drunk, very drunk. But you madam are ugly, and tomorrow morning I shall be sober." WSC)
To: EveningStar
Try "However, as any idiot knows..."
19 posted on
03/17/2005 6:09:39 PM PST by
LongElegantLegs
(I considered getting highlights; but my smugness is easier to maintain.)
To: EveningStar
The semi-colon is useful in some instances, the word 'rather' with a comma is useful in others. [HINT: when the word 'because' or the phrase 'that said' or the word 'therefore' can be used, a semi-colon followed by a complete clause (at least) is acceptable in formal and even novel writing.
20 posted on
03/17/2005 6:25:45 PM PST by
MHGinTN
(If you can read this, you've had life support from someone. Promote life support for others.)
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