Posted on 03/17/2005 3:51:12 PM PST by EveningStar
This transition seems to be overused, at least to me: having said that and its variations that said, that being said, that having been said, etc.
Now my problem is this. I'm not a particularly good writer and I've always had problems with transitions. Can anyone offer help to me and others on the use of transitions without falling back on the previous examples? Also, do you think I was right in referring to the aforementioned transition as being overused. And while we're at it, is transition the proper term?
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Having read that, I'm sure many Freeper grammarians will rush to assist.
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Now, having said that, my BA is in English, so I can help, but I need to you clarify your question.
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however
therefore
accordingly
as such
Here's another phrase that is not only overused but used incorrectly:
"Hopefully, somone will answer your question."
I know that's wrong, yet I often use the expression for want of an alternative.
Do you speak well? If yes, write like you speak. The harder you have to think about HOW to do something, the harder it becomes to actually do it.
Try using none at all.
Grammar threads generate forcefields that cause typos and other errors to occur. It's just a law of nature. On a grammar thread it doesn't matter how many times you proofread your post, your eyes won't see the mistake.
I think you meant to say "Hopefully, salmon will answer your question" ;)
Love the way you make your examples entertaining and true!
Well, I find myself overusing "however", "nonetheless", and "nevertheless." :)
I prefer to keep a separate pair of sunglasses.
That being the case and in any event, good luck...
If it feels good - do it;)
My opinion.
All transitions are over used.
English is best when it is short and to the point. Simply illiminate transitions, you will only put a few back in during proof reading.
See? It's forcefields I tell ya.
On any other thread you would have typed "illiminate" and your eyes instantly would've told you that you had blown it. But not on a grammar thread.
You have no excuse for the run-on sentence, though.
Try "However, as any idiot knows..."
The semi-colon is useful in some instances, the word 'rather' with a comma is useful in others. [HINT: when the word 'because' or the phrase 'that said' or the word 'therefore' can be used, a semi-colon followed by a complete clause (at least) is acceptable in formal and even novel writing.
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