Poetry and Potpourri .... November 14-15-16, 2003

11-14-2003 | JustAmy, St.Louie1 and Mama_Bear

[Jen]

How adorable.

[Jen]

Thanks for sharing your wonderful poems. I wish I had half your talent.

[The Mayor]

Thanks for the update, Prayers for Sasso...

Good Night P&P

[Jen]

You're my Rainbow Friend...

"What is that?" you ask.

A Rainbow Friend is a special kind of friend.

Each color of the rainbow stands for a different aspect of a Rainbow Friend...

Red stands for the sacrifices you have made for me... Giving up your time from other things to be with me when I really needed it...

Orange stands for the fun times we share together.

Yellow stands for the way you brighten up my life.

Green stands for the way you support me in the things that I do.

Blue stands for the tears I have shared with you.

Violet stands for our trust in each other.

Put them all together, and they are you... My Rainbow Friend!

(Author Unknown)

[Jen]

Good Night Mayor and bless you for praying for Sasso.

[Jen]

Beautiful poem Calpernia! I love rainbows.

[Jen]

LowCarb Sour Cream Pancakes! Thanks for that recipe - I must try it. I have been missing pancakes for breakfast so much. My hubby used to make wonderful ones with molasses and cinnamon. Yum! But that was before we started low carbing. Any low carb substitute for molasses that you know of?

[JustAmy]

I've probably seen most of the 476 and they are all adorable. It has been like watching a miracle the way that precious baby is growing!
Thanks for the posts and the pings to Logan's page.

[OESY]

Tao of the Renga *

crystals form like fallen ferns
fond memories flirting in time

gone the green essence of life
fine fronds weaving with the wind

feathery wisps of lace blend
with blue skies and autumn hues

light peers through, distant, haunting
an eery pause to reflect

our spirit seeks elusive truths
silence merely mocks with smiles

we yearn to hear the message
only sorrows pierce the calm

* Renga or "linked verse" is Japanese poetry
whereby people take turns adding lines or verses.
One types 7 (or 5) syllables -- not words -- in a line,
which is in turn completed by another person.
Poems can branch off in multiple lines to
form a "kika" or "branched verse".

The selection above, however, was composed
more or less properly(?) by this lone sole who
was inspired by patterns on a car windshield
photographed Nov. 6 in Walla Walla, Washington.
Interested parties are invited, nay encouraged, to
revise and extend my remarks, or lines to that effect.

More samples of Tao of the Renga

[JustAmy]

Hello there, Jen. It's great to see you and the news on Sasso sounds very encouraging. I've been thinking about you today. Just wondering if there was any news on Sasso.

[JustAmy]

Oh how I wish I had the talent to contribute to your Renga!

We have some pretty talented poets here, maybe they will make a contribution.

[fish hawk]

ORCHARDS

white blossoms 'dorn the apple trees
much like a wedding gown
I watch them falling in the breeze
like pinwheels floating down
       sweet snow upon the ground

     STORM

the wind has circled the island
the sea has changed its course
great waves sculpting the softer sand
lambastes the shore with force
                it seems without remorse

[fish hawk]

beside clinging vetch
are golden trumpets waking
lift their arms to stretch
           poets wit nor feathered quill 
           have improved the daffodil


flowers of the sea
rainbows of the waxing tide
bright enemone
       all the colors you display
       dancing in a sea ballet

on a  distant plane
smoke is mingling with the clouds
burning bright the cane
            harvesting the sugar crops
            sweetening the candy shops

                           Haiku by Fish Hawk

[carlo3b]

I know you will enjoy this recipe.. :)

[fish hawk]

night came flaunting loneliness
the gibbous moon is blue
the stars are many yet so far
their warmth I never knew
no substitute for you

the sea has lost his composure
tormented to the core
he takes his wrath out on the rocks
that decorate the shore
you should have heard him roar

   These last three posts ,if you noticed, are 
three different types of Haiku.  Aloha Fish Hawk

[JustAmy]

Good Night, Fish Hawk.

I have posted the Monday thread ... would you like to bring these three new poems over there?

If not, do you mind if I copy them over for all to see? They are wonderful and I need to read them again to guarantee that I missed nothing the first time.