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To: JustAmy
night came flaunting loneliness
the gibbous moon is blue
the stars are many yet so far
their warmth I never knew
no substitute for you

the sea has lost his composure
tormented to the core
he takes his wrath out on the rocks
that decorate the shore
you should have heard him roar

   These last three posts ,if you noticed, are 
three different types of Haiku.  Aloha Fish Hawk



195 posted on 11/16/2003 9:33:18 PM PST by fish hawk
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To: fish hawk
Good Night, Fish Hawk.

I have posted the Monday thread ... would you like to bring these three new poems over there?

If not, do you mind if I copy them over for all to see? They are wonderful and I need to read them again to guarantee that I missed nothing the first time.
196 posted on 11/16/2003 9:56:41 PM PST by JustAmy (God Bless our Military, Past and Present. God Bless America!)
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