To: ZinGirl
What is the correct answer?
2 posted on
05/15/2003 4:12:41 PM PDT by
netmilsmom
(Bush/Rice 2004- pray for our troops)
To: netmilsmom
here's what "they" say: the sentence was incorrect because the pronoun in the sentence -- "her" -- was used improperly. Keegan said pronouns should only refer to nouns and in this case Morrison's name is used as an adjective.
3 posted on
05/15/2003 4:14:25 PM PDT by
ZinGirl
To: netmilsmom
(I meant to add that I thought it should be "which" instead of "that" in the sentence.....shows what *I* know!)
4 posted on
05/15/2003 4:15:34 PM PDT by
ZinGirl
To: netmilsmom
Toni Morrison has a genius which allows her to... blah blah...
But I think the REAL correction ought to be:
Toni Morrison writes mediocre novels... blah blah
To: netmilsmom
"The genius of Toni Morrison enables her to do whatever she does." Like that.
6 posted on
05/15/2003 4:16:22 PM PDT by
CaptainJustice
(Dangerous Jesus Lover)
To: netmilsmom
"What is the correct answer?" I have put in the appropriate corrections:
Toni Morrison's genius as an enabler arises from the injustices African-Americans like Bill Clinton have endured."
To: netmilsmom
I believe for it to be
grammitically correct the sentence should read:
"Toni Morrison is enabled by her genius to..."
This makes "Toni Morrison" rather than "Tony MOrrison's genius" the subject of the sentence.
For it to be logically correct the sentence would have to be reconstructed entirely.
17 posted on
05/15/2003 4:20:53 PM PDT by
So Cal Rocket
(Free Miguel and Priscilla!)
To: netmilsmom
What would have been a proper way to express the thought?
25 posted on
05/15/2003 4:24:24 PM PDT by
MHT
To: netmilsmom
I'm reserving judgement until I hear what F.Christian has to say about this grammar and syntax.
60 posted on
05/15/2003 4:40:05 PM PDT by
Rebel_Ace
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To: netmilsmom
The correct answer would be that "her" is a dangling modifier.
78 posted on
05/15/2003 4:49:46 PM PDT by
krb
(the statement on the other side of this tagline is false)
To: netmilsmom
Technically then, I think it should be:
"Toni Morrison's genius enables THE AUTHOR to create novels that arise from and express the injustices African-Americans have endured."
But as a sentence, it seems initially poor anyway. Her genius would produce a brilliant expression of the injustices, but it would be her experience or knowledge that would allow the brilliantly-written novels to have risen from the topics mentioned.
I have never read any of her writings, so really can't comment otherwise.
To: netmilsmom
I believe this is the correct version: Toni Morrison be a good noveler and chronicler of her peep's problems. Word.
124 posted on
05/15/2003 5:43:37 PM PDT by
rabidralph
(Giggle if you want to.)
To: netmilsmom
I would guess that "Toni Morrison's genius enables her to create novels that arise from and express the injustices African-Americans have endured." Would have to be rendered as "Toni Morrison's genius enables
it to create novels that arise from and express the injustices African-Americans have endured."
See, it's the 'genius' that has enabled...sounds much worse, tho.
137 posted on
05/15/2003 6:25:38 PM PDT by
boris
(Education is always painful; pain is always educational)
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