[Nachum]

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[Faith]

My high school English teacher would never tolerate such writing.

[txroadkill]

We know more about the White House Chef than we do about the SDS Puppet he cooks for.

435 more days...

[MadMax, the Grinning Reaper]

Well done, Jack. Keep investigating. The truth is out there and you are getting closer.

[Norm Lenhart]

If that is representative of his overall writing, I can see why he locked up almost all the evidence. That is the writing style of a man using words he does not fully comprehend...AKA using big or ‘smart’ words to sound impressive and hide a lack of knowledge.

Or he wrote it in the third grade.

[thecodont]

Social promotion

Hollow man

Fraud

[tsowellfan]

There's a lot about Obama I've read and must say I tend to believe.

Barry still could not get a real job, because he was still a fraud, even with his Harvard degree in hand he could lie and take the Bar exam, but he could not work as a lawyer for a major law firm without a back ground investigation and he would never pass one. So, Michelle got Barry a job at her law firm. Barry never filed a case alone and never filed a motion. He wrote lots of memos according to the law firm where Barry worked. (I think they know Barry is a fraud and don't want to be sued by previous clients) Barry rescinded his law licenses, so as not to be disbarred for fraud. The Bar knows Barry lied on his application. Michelle also had to turn over her law license for her involvement in corruption with the Chicago mayors office.

[csense]

"...syntactically muddled..."

I like that. Me steal.

[Huntress]

bump

[Sea Parrot]

I never got beyond the eighth grade, but if the Obama standard was the norm, guess I never missed much.

[PetroniusMaximus]

ping

[skr]

“I’d like to take the time to clarify” instead of “I’d like to clarify”, just one example of badly needed editing.

[CitizenM]

Bump for a second reading!

[CitizenM]

Bump for a second reading!

[wiggen]

Good stuff to show people who believe he’s the smartest guy in the room.

[Belasarius]

This is the first thing I have ever seen on the writing of Barack Obama. I had heard that he contributed no law review articles and that everything else had been scrubbed or buried.

This pretty much confirms what I believed. Jeez...what a country.

When Obama and Perry (if he is the candidate) debate maybe they should have an essay question, ‘Write 1000 words on what the Constitution means to you.’ Then they should project it for the audience so we can read what they write. That would be entertaining and enlightening. I can see him peeking over Perry’s shoulder while Perry is hunching up trying to protect his answer.

[Bon mots]

Where can I download the entire Obama-written article?

[NTHockey]

A president who can’t write an intelligent sentence and a VP who can’t speak a sentence without putting his foot in his mouth - what have we devolved into. The line of Roman emperors comes close to this pair of doofusses.

[Victoria_R]

Obama's letter and Michelle's thesis are written in that pseudo-intellectual academic mumbo-jumbo which they teach to students. It's just plain bad writing designed to confuse people and to give the impression of the author's superior knowledge and intelligence.

[CanaGuy]

The quality of oratory these days certainly seems to be on a downward slope. Check this masterly putdown by one of history's great Conservative speakers:

"A sophistical rhetorician inebriated with the exuberance of his own verbosity, and gifted with an egotistical imagination that can, at all times, command an interminable and inconsistent series of arguments to malign an opponent and to glorify himself."

-- Benjamin Disraeli (about his parliamentary opponent, and Liberal, Gladstone; from a speech at Knightsbridge, July 27, 1878)--[Bartlett's]