It's probably going to take a more skilled person than me to do what you suggest--but I thought it captured the man...
Hubby and I create b-roll videos for products shown on the two major shopping channels here, and in Canada and Europe. I guess this is the only reason I felt my opinion might be helpful. In 30-45 seconds, without audio or text, we must show what the product does, entice people's imagination as to how the product could help them in THEIR life-and bypass any obvious sales hurdles a product might have in people's minds.
EVERYthing in life is selling, whether it's you, a product, a concept, or...as the Dems seem to know how to do best, a "feeling."
IMHO again, Republicans want ACTION (goals) with the bonus feeling of patriotism. Dems prefer their goals translated through group feelings, with an occasional action someone ELSE is taking. This is how to tap the emotional "buttons" of the two groups and get them to vote. Everytime I think about it, I become more and more proud to be a Republican woman of action and personal responsibilities vs. a Democrat metrosexual loving, group hug, group decision making person. ;-)
Yours is great. It is a promo.
That with links to sites, etc. with his actions is fine. Yours sets a moment.
The other video....well, I had old bad game shows immediately come to mind.
But, I’ve not tried to create video yet, so I don’t know what is involved.