1 posted on
02/20/2004 10:34:23 AM PST by
jmstein7
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To: jmstein7
Good job. Add a picture of Uday, Kusay and Saddam to the list of accomplishments.
To: jmstein7
Good start.
First, you have properly pointed to Bush's one trick pony this year-- security. He has to hit with that over and over. This election has to be about national security.
Scrap the part about "The Democrats Did Nothing." It's not necessary. You want Democrat votes, too.
Just show all the recent times (caption with vivid single picture) when we've been hit by Islamist terrorism (no music, bell ring each one-- like the kind they use at memorial ceremonies):
1993: World Trade Center
1993: Somalia Rescue Casualties
1994: Ari Halberstam
1996: TWA Flight 800
1996: Khobar Towers; Saudi Arabia
1998: US Embassy; Kenya
2000: USS Cole; Yemen
2001: 9/11
"For too long, we failed to seriously respond to the threat from terrorism, but now we are taking the fight to terrorists holed up in caves and spiderholes. Our worldwide campaign against terrorists has only begun, but President Bush is committed to it. Together, we will not tire, we will not falter, and we will not fail."
56 posted on
02/20/2004 11:47:09 AM PST by
GraniteStateConservative
("Bush wakes up every morning thinking about how to take the war to the terrorists." -- C. Hitchens)
To: jmstein7
tripod says page or file isn't there. :(
60 posted on
02/20/2004 12:52:30 PM PST by
Mia T
(Stop Clintons' Undermining Machinations (The acronym is the message.))
To: jmstein7
Sweet! Hope you don't mind me mirroring a copy here.
64 posted on
02/20/2004 1:49:25 PM PST by
LayoutGuru2
(Call me paranoid but finding '/*' inside this comment makes me suspicious)
To: jmstein7
Liked it!
To: jmstein7
I like it. Good Job.
72 posted on
02/20/2004 4:15:43 PM PST by
SAMWolf
(Contrary to popular belief Hamas has nothing to do with ham. If you throw ham at them they get angry)
To: jmstein7
Bump
Pretty darn good.
Few suggestions here would make it great. (coming from a guy who could not do it well at all)
Great Job.
73 posted on
02/20/2004 4:18:59 PM PST by
CyberCowboy777
(We should never ever apologize for who we are, what we believe in, and what we stand for.)
To: jmstein7
I'm getting 11 sec only.
76 posted on
02/20/2004 5:34:59 PM PST by
Bob J
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77 posted on
02/20/2004 6:34:36 PM PST by
ATOMIC_PUNK
(Jhn 15:13 Greater love hath no man than this, that a man lay down his life for his friends.)
To: jmstein7
7.2MB!!!
I can't. I have a dial-up. =o(
got some stills and text from the narration??
78 posted on
02/20/2004 6:40:45 PM PST by
GeronL
(http://www.ArmorforCongress.com......................Send a Freeper to Congress!)
To: jmstein7
bump
83 posted on
02/20/2004 11:53:27 PM PST by
yonif
("If I Forget Thee, O Jerusalem, Let My Right Hand Wither" - Psalms 137:5)
To: jmstein7
Wow. That is a GREAT ad. Yeah, maybe the music could be a little different. Saddam's and Binny's faces ought to be there....but a series of different ads would be far better than trying to fit everything into one ad. You fit as much as you could into a 43 second ad and did an excellent job.
BUMP
84 posted on
02/21/2004 6:43:01 AM PST by
cake_crumb
(UN Resolutions = Very Expensive, Very SCRATCHY Toilet Paper)
To: jmstein7
A day late and a dollar short, that's me! The link no longer works. Is it somewhere else?
85 posted on
02/21/2004 6:44:25 AM PST by
clyde260
((Public Enemy #1: Network News))
To: jmstein7
Got it! Nevermind.
86 posted on
02/21/2004 6:46:32 AM PST by
clyde260
((Public Enemy #1: Network News))
To: jmstein7
Great Job, have some Muslim music playing when the towers come down and then some patriotic music (God Bless America) when Bush comes on.
90 posted on
02/21/2004 8:21:30 PM PST by
Coleus
(Help Tyler Schicke http://tylerfund.org/ Burkitt's leukemia)
To: jmstein7
I think it is an excellent start. I think it needs to be tweaked a bit.
The over all message is a good one. I would look for some different music, either something with a stark contrast to the photos, or something patriotic.
I would work on the ending a bit...It ends too quickly and doesn't lead the eye to the text, as much as I think you may like it to.
I think you could find a better graphic of Bill Clinton in the lip bite- IMO- this one is a bit too large, but good posture for your point, however.
I would be glad to help you if you are looking for help.. I have some music on my server that I can send you and can find more, and I can help you look for graphics if you need some help.
91 posted on
02/22/2004 11:17:56 AM PST by
Diva Betsy Ross
(Every heart beats true for the red ,white and blue!)
To: jmstein7
I got another one of those error messages, I am betting you did a bang up job,though .
99 posted on
02/25/2004 6:49:34 PM PST by
gatorbait
(Yesterday, today and tomorrow......The United States Army)
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