[So Cal Rocket]

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[No Blue States]

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[BykrBayb]

If nobody can see the ad, it won't do much good.

[smith288]

you need to find a host. Ill be willing to host it for you.

[eyespysomething]

Good job.

The only thing, they did arrest people for the first Trade Center bombing, right? Maybe touch on the fact that police don't need to handle this, our military do.

[Forgiven_Sinner]

The images and text are good and punchy. It ends a little abruptly--I was expecting an image of Saddam Hussein as the last one.

The music is beautiful, but it doesn't go with the images. Work with some of the FReepers who have good musical talent to get the appropriate music to go with your commercial.

I think you're right to have two different musical themes, one for the beginning and one for the end. I would extend Bush's accomplishments and cut down on one of the democratic failures--maybe the "Bin Laden on a Silver platter" one, since that isn't common knowledge and may confuse people.

Keep plugging! You've got a good idea.

[quantim]

right click and then "save target as" works perfect!

[MotleyGirl70]

Doesn't work.

[Recovering_Democrat]

Nice piece. A few suggestions:

1. Shorten it to 30 seconds. You may be able to get it on a local cable or network affiliate. 2. Make a 15 second version; you might be able to get short 15 second spots on tv for a much lower rate. 3. Your spot appeals WONDERFULLY to those of us who think the Democrats are scumbags. It will energize the base. Make another version with "Washington", as opposed to "Clinton" or "The Democrats" as the target. This spot can be used to move independents and wavering Democrats over without making it look like a "hit piece" on Clinton. 4. Consider making a radio ad: use a good voice over during the graphics presentation, and some "emergency sounds" as a bed for the NYC pictures, some "Arab TV/language sounds" for the bin-Laden graphics, and perhaps the "The Whole World Hears You!" soundbite from the President. 5. You've done a very good job here: I'm not denigrating your work, just looking at ways to expand it and/or make it more accessible to the general public. Do you do this as a hobby or for a living? As a producer/editor myself, I may be motivated now to make a few. :) RD

[Sofa King]

Pretty good.

[Recovering_Democrat]

Re-formatted.

Nice piece. A few suggestions:

1. Shorten it to 30 seconds. You may be able to get it on a local cable or network affiliate.

2. Make a 15 second version; you might be able to get short 15 second spots on tv for a much lower rate.

3. Your spot appeals WONDERFULLY to those of us who think the Democrats are scumbags. It will energize the base. Make another version with "Washington", as opposed to "Clinton" or "The Democrats" as the target. This spot can be used to move independents and wavering Democrats over without making it look like a "hit piece" on Clinton.

4. Consider making a radio ad: use a good voice over during the graphics presentation, and some "emergency sounds" as a bed for the NYC pictures, some "Arab TV/language sounds" for the bin-Laden graphics, and perhaps the "The Whole World Hears You!" soundbite from the President.

5. You've done a very good job here: I'm not denigrating your work, just looking at ways to expand it and/or make it more accessible to the general public. Do you do this as a hobby or for a living? As a producer/editor myself, I may be motivated now to make a few. :) RD

[ru4liberty]

Here's what I get:

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[deeaggie]

I'm new to FR. Have been reading and lurking and learning for a few weeks. Have been a Bush supporter since way back (Texas Governor).

Like your ad! Reading on my lunch break at work and thankfully have DSL so it downloaded quickly. My computer sound card is on "blink", so if there's any sound didn't get that. Do like the message though!

[TomGuy]

You might check out this link for webspace.

http://photobucket.com/

[GraniteStateConservative]

The Bankrate.com ad? Is it a metaphor?

: )

[socal_parrot]

Great ad. Congrats on your creation.

[Wild Irish Rogue]

Excellent work ! This is the way we will have to combat the mainstream media covering for Democrats- we'll blast the truth around the internet.

[alex]

Looks nice, but I would say that we need a similar thing with the focus on economy.

Bill Clinton got booming economy when he was elected.

He run it into the ground with high taxes in 8 short years.

On the way he and his cronies robbed whole generation of their savings in an Internet bubble.

When GW warned about coming economic problems and called for action even before he was elected he was accused in 'talking the economy down'.

When GW asked for lifesaving tax cut, Democrats resisted for the whole year and allowed the country to slip into recession.

Now they are blaming GW in problems of their own making. Democrats cannot be trusted.

[quantim]

On this subject I snagged the domain name www.ketchupboy.com so the dems couldn't sit on it. I'll donate it to a FReeper who wants to play with tomatoes.

Also, the file as you probably know the file is too big to email - perhaps you can get a FReeper to redo it in a 'FLASH' presentation that would be a fraction of the size, small enough to email by the masses.

[Triple Word Score]

The music is a problem. It just doesn't fit. Find a clip of a Sousa march that starts slow and changes to triumphant.

And yeah, Saddam's face needs to be there--and you need to show jubilant Iraqis too IMHO. Can you imagine having lived under Saddam and then not having to anymore???

It's like having lived under Clinton and not having to anymore--times a million.