1 posted on
02/20/2004 10:34:23 AM PST by
jmstein7
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warning... 7.2 MB file... downloading now.
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"This file is hosted by Tripod, a Lycos®Network Site, and is not available for download. Please check out Tripod's Help system for more information about Remote Loading and our Remote Loading policy."
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If nobody can see the ad, it won't do much good.
7 posted on
02/20/2004 10:40:48 AM PST by
BykrBayb
(Temporary tagline. Applied to State of New Jersey for permanent tagline (12/24/03).)
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you need to find a host. Ill be willing to host it for you.
9 posted on
02/20/2004 10:41:35 AM PST by
smith288
(http://www.ejsmithweb.com/FR/JohnKerry/)
To: jmstein7
Good job.
The only thing, they did arrest people for the first Trade Center bombing, right? Maybe touch on the fact that police don't need to handle this, our military do.
13 posted on
02/20/2004 10:48:17 AM PST by
eyespysomething
(There is no threat. The Communists are not about to take over our McDonald hamburger stands. JFK '71)
To: jmstein7
The images and text are good and punchy. It ends a little abruptly--I was expecting an image of Saddam Hussein as the last one.
The music is beautiful, but it doesn't go with the images. Work with some of the FReepers who have good musical talent to get the appropriate music to go with your commercial.
I think you're right to have two different musical themes, one for the beginning and one for the end. I would extend Bush's accomplishments and cut down on one of the democratic failures--maybe the "Bin Laden on a Silver platter" one, since that isn't common knowledge and may confuse people.
Keep plugging! You've got a good idea.
15 posted on
02/20/2004 10:49:23 AM PST by
Forgiven_Sinner
(Praying for the Kingdom of God.)
To: jmstein7
right click and then "save target as" works perfect!
18 posted on
02/20/2004 10:51:44 AM PST by
quantim
(Victory is not relative, it is absolute.)
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Doesn't work.
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Nice piece. A few suggestions:
1. Shorten it to 30 seconds. You may be able to get it on a local cable or network affiliate. 2. Make a 15 second version; you might be able to get short 15 second spots on tv for a much lower rate. 3. Your spot appeals WONDERFULLY to those of us who think the Democrats are scumbags. It will energize the base. Make another version with "Washington", as opposed to "Clinton" or "The Democrats" as the target. This spot can be used to move independents and wavering Democrats over without making it look like a "hit piece" on Clinton. 4. Consider making a radio ad: use a good voice over during the graphics presentation, and some "emergency sounds" as a bed for the NYC pictures, some "Arab TV/language sounds" for the bin-Laden graphics, and perhaps the "The Whole World Hears You!" soundbite from the President. 5. You've done a very good job here: I'm not denigrating your work, just looking at ways to expand it and/or make it more accessible to the general public. Do you do this as a hobby or for a living? As a producer/editor myself, I may be motivated now to make a few. :) RD
21 posted on
02/20/2004 10:53:16 AM PST by
Recovering_Democrat
(I'm so glad to no longer be associated with the Party of Dependence on Government!)
To: jmstein7
Pretty good.
24 posted on
02/20/2004 10:53:56 AM PST by
Sofa King
(MY rights are not subject to YOUR approval http://www.angelfire.com/art2/sofaking/index.html)
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Re-formatted.
Nice piece. A few suggestions:
1. Shorten it to 30 seconds. You may be able to get it on a local cable or network affiliate.
2. Make a 15 second version; you might be able to get short 15 second spots on tv for a much lower rate.
3. Your spot appeals WONDERFULLY to those of us who think the Democrats are scumbags. It will energize the base. Make another version with "Washington", as opposed to "Clinton" or "The Democrats" as the target. This spot can be used to move independents and wavering Democrats over without making it look like a "hit piece" on Clinton.
4. Consider making a radio ad: use a good voice over during the graphics presentation, and some "emergency sounds" as a bed for the NYC pictures, some "Arab TV/language sounds" for the bin-Laden graphics, and perhaps the "The Whole World Hears You!" soundbite from the President.
5. You've done a very good job here: I'm not denigrating your work, just looking at ways to expand it and/or make it more accessible to the general public. Do you do this as a hobby or for a living? As a producer/editor myself, I may be motivated now to make a few. :) RD
26 posted on
02/20/2004 10:54:10 AM PST by
Recovering_Democrat
(I'm so glad to no longer be associated with the Party of Dependence on Government!)
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Here's what I get:
This file is hosted by Tripod, a Lycos®Network Site, and is not available for download. Please check out Tripod's Help system for more information about Remote Loading and our Remote Loading policy.
27 posted on
02/20/2004 10:54:42 AM PST by
ru4liberty
(I don't know what tomorrow holds, but I know Who holds tomorrow. May His Name ever be praised!)
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I'm new to FR. Have been reading and lurking and learning for a few weeks. Have been a Bush supporter since way back (Texas Governor).
Like your ad! Reading on my lunch break at work and thankfully have DSL so it downloaded quickly. My computer sound card is on "blink", so if there's any sound didn't get that. Do like the message though!
30 posted on
02/20/2004 10:56:34 AM PST by
deeaggie
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34 posted on
02/20/2004 11:04:28 AM PST by
TomGuy
To: jmstein7
The Bankrate.com ad? Is it a metaphor?
: )
36 posted on
02/20/2004 11:06:15 AM PST by
GraniteStateConservative
("Bush wakes up every morning thinking about how to take the war to the terrorists." -- C. Hitchens)
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Great ad. Congrats on your creation.
37 posted on
02/20/2004 11:06:25 AM PST by
socal_parrot
(Howard Dean, contact your career counselor.)
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Excellent work ! This is the way we will have to combat the mainstream media covering for Democrats- we'll blast the truth around the internet.
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Looks nice, but I would say that we need a similar thing with the focus on economy.
Bill Clinton got booming economy when he was elected.
He run it into the ground with high taxes in 8 short years.
On the way he and his cronies robbed whole generation of their savings in an Internet bubble.
When GW warned about coming economic problems and called for action even before he was elected he was accused in 'talking the economy down'.
When GW asked for lifesaving tax cut, Democrats resisted for the whole year and allowed the country to slip into recession.
Now they are blaming GW in problems of their own making. Democrats cannot be trusted.
43 posted on
02/20/2004 11:13:47 AM PST by
alex
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On this subject I snagged the domain name www.ketchupboy.com so the dems couldn't sit on it. I'll donate it to a FReeper who wants to play with tomatoes.
Also, the file as you probably know the file is too big to email - perhaps you can get a FReeper to redo it in a 'FLASH' presentation that would be a fraction of the size, small enough to email by the masses.
45 posted on
02/20/2004 11:16:35 AM PST by
quantim
(Victory is not relative, it is absolute.)
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The music is a problem. It just doesn't fit. Find a clip of a Sousa march that starts slow and changes to triumphant.
And yeah, Saddam's face needs to be there--and you need to show jubilant Iraqis too IMHO. Can you imagine having lived under Saddam and then not having to anymore???
It's like having lived under Clinton and not having to anymore--times a million.
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