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10/4/03 | myself

Posted on 10/04/2003 9:25:46 PM PDT by paladinkc

Every once in a while I come up with these, and I am like ok God what are you trying to tell me, cause I end up preaching to myself more than anything, here it goes, I hope you get as much out of it as I did.

Time must be given a reference, when it comes to the past
Without it, we cannot look at ourselves in an honest light
Foreword it speeds us toward the final end brutally fast
Backwards it looks as if it were just a blink or a fortnight
Yielding to us lessons to be learned, memories to be treasured.
God grant that we make use of it wisely, not in arguments or petty hate
Grant that we use each moment at its best, as each moment is carefully measured.
Give us the courage to stand up for the needy, the oppressed, and to challenge fate
Give us the moments with our friends and family, the memories that won’t fade
Give us the might to thwart the wicked and the power to stand for what is right
Give us the insight that freedom is not something for which you can trade,
That it’s something that’s earned with blood, sweat, tears, and not without a fight
God give that we use this time to show others what true love is
Grant that we show You inside of us, that people see your wonderful love.
Grant that they see what eternal love is and that with You, nothing can be amiss
We need to take the wasted moments, and wrap them up with care and love
Realize that it cannot be returned, that the gift once spent is forever gone away
Help us to play with our children, hug and kiss our spouses every time
Grant that we use it serving you, and others even as we pray
For our life, like this poem must end, because they both always have a last line


TOPICS: Poetry; Religion; The Poetry Branch
KEYWORDS: poetry

1 posted on 10/04/2003 9:25:46 PM PDT by paladinkc
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To: paladinkc
I am like ok with this.
2 posted on 10/05/2003 1:02:26 AM PDT by Rudder
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3 posted on 10/05/2003 1:03:32 AM PDT by Support Free Republic (Your support keeps Free Republic going strong!)
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To: paladinkc
Nice poem.

Did you know there's a new Poetry & Potpourri thread at FR?. You may want to share your poem there with other FReepers who enjoy poetry.

4 posted on 10/05/2003 1:32:23 PM PDT by Jen (Ain't skeered to use my 'real' screenname.)
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To: paladinkc; SAMWolf; snippy_about_it; MistyCA; Victoria Delsoul; JustAmy; Darksheare; HiJinx
Just noticed on your profile that you are a disabled veteran. Many thanks to you for your service to our country! You may also enjoy the FReeper Foxhole daily thread in the VetsCoR Forum. If you enjoy the Foxhole, just let my buddies SAMWolf or Snippy_About_It know and they'll ping you to each day's new thread.

Pinging some FRiends to welcome you since you are fairly new around here. Nice to meet you! Jen

5 posted on 10/05/2003 1:37:41 PM PDT by Jen (Ain't skeered to use my 'real' screenname.)
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To: paladinkc; AntiJen
Thanks so much for the poem.

Thanks for the ping, Jen.

Bump.

6 posted on 10/05/2003 2:15:04 PM PDT by Victoria Delsoul (Arnold has the conviction and the fighting spirit to lead California into a new age of recovery)
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To: AntiJen; SAMWolf; bentfeather
Thank you Jen for the plug. Everyone is always welcome at the Foxhole.

Hello paladinkc, nice writing. Poet bentfeather also has a running poetry thread, no rules, just folks writing what they feel the need to.

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7 posted on 10/05/2003 2:18:22 PM PDT by snippy_about_it (Fall in --> The FReeper Foxhole. America's History. America's Soul.)
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To: paladinkc; snippy_about_it; AntiJen
Good poem.

We need to take the wasted moments, and wrap them up with care and love
Realize that it cannot be returned, that the gift once spent is forever gone away

I like these lines. Welcome to FR and thanks for your service to our country.

8 posted on 10/05/2003 2:21:44 PM PDT by SAMWolf (This Tagline is umop apisdn)
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To: AntiJen; paladinkc
Welcome to you, Paladinkc, and thank you for your service. I hope to see you here often! :)
9 posted on 10/05/2003 3:30:29 PM PDT by MistyCA (For some...it's always going to be "A Nam Thing!")
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To: paladinkc
I really enjoyed what you wrote! It certainly does put things into perspective. Thank you for sharing it.
10 posted on 10/05/2003 3:32:36 PM PDT by MistyCA (For some...it's always going to be "A Nam Thing!")
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To: paladinkc
I am like ok God what are you trying to tell me, cause I end up preaching to myself more than anything,

Anything worth preaching to oneself is worth sharing with the rest of us. I'm glad you did...there are thoughts in there that I really needed to see this weekend.

Thanks, Paladinkc!

11 posted on 10/05/2003 3:51:10 PM PDT by HiJinx (If you're not making waves, you're not kicking hard enough.)
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To: snippy_about_it
Thanks for the plug snippy!

:-)
12 posted on 10/05/2003 7:07:06 PM PDT by Soaring Feather (~Poets' Know the Unknown~)
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