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~The Dragon Flies Lair II~
bentfeather
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Posted on 09/30/2003 5:27:59 PM PDT by snippy_about_it
   
    
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                   | My Dragon Fly and Me 
                             
                            If I could be a Dragon Fly and wing my way through the sky I would never be shy just me and my Dragon Fly! By moonlight we ride the wind chase the comets tail for fun by day we would hide from the sun our fragile wings would come undone  On darkest nights we would use fireflies as our guides we would dip and we would glide through the heavens open wide and scatter diamonds in the night sky my Dragon Fly and I...  And we would wing past our lovers silent in the night... to kiss their face in our flight much to their surprise and delight my Dragon Fly and me in sight...  Such a view do we share away up here in the air of breezes soft through our hair my Dragon Fly and me a pair...  bentfeather© |  |  |  |  | 
   
  
TOPICS: Poetry
KEYWORDS: freeverse; haiku; michaeldobbs; poems; poetry; poets
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To: Flurry
    Jimmy Buffet. "You got Finns to the left, Finns to the right. And you're the only bait in town." 
 ROTFLMAO!
 ooooops!!!
 
To: bentfeather
    My music background is broad.
782
posted on 
10/16/2003 6:55:14 AM PDT
by 
Conspiracy Guy
(On October 11, 2003 I asked Laura Earl to be my wife.  "Well sure, I mean, I guess", was her answer.)
 
To: Flurry
    Do you write lyrics??
To: bentfeather
    I did when I was younger but I need a virgin tune to work with. I lost my tune writer to a car accident before we got anywhere with it. Lyrics are easier than poems or prose. You basically need two 3 line verses and a chorus for pop or country. I am a master of the quick hook and the twist of the tale. I still write them but don't publish cause someday the Lord is gonna find me a tune writer.
784
posted on 
10/16/2003 7:07:07 AM PDT
by 
Conspiracy Guy
(On October 11, 2003 I asked Laura Earl to be my wife.  "Well sure, I mean, I guess", was her answer.)
 
To: Flurry; Darksheare; SAMWolf
    Lyrics are easier than poems or prose.
  Really???Don't you need a tune in your head??? Some years back a tune writer want to work with me. I offered to help him, but never heard from him. :-( Sometimes I can write perfect rhyme, other times just Free Verse. Mostly Free Verse.
 
To: bentfeather
    If you notice my little poems. They usually meter very strictly. Not always the same meter from poem to poem. Sometimes I change meter in a poem. In lyrics you can change the meter every two lines or stick with it. You can sub music licks for meter through lyrical pause. It is fun and you save a lot of words. It is easier with a tune but you can write lyrics first and a good tune writer can shovel music into it. I have worked both ways. Jim Morrison of the Doors was a poet first and a lyricist after.
786
posted on 
10/16/2003 7:29:57 AM PDT
by 
Conspiracy Guy
(On October 11, 2003 I asked Laura Earl to be my wife.  "Well sure, I mean, I guess", was her answer.)
 
To: bentfeather
    I have tunes stuck in my head, and sometimes lyrics, but I have absolutely no musical talent at all. 
Can't read sheet music to save my life, let alone write it. 
And I'm tonedeaf as a post. 
 
Sometimes poems will come to me to a tune in my head. 
Or I'll hear a song while dreaming, a song that does not exist in the waking world. 
I end up having to write furiously to get it down before it fades. 
 
Kinda like these two fragments that came ot me last night, to Pink Floyd style music off of Momentary Lapse of Reason: 
 
You shoved me, wingless 
Out into the darkened sky 
cruelly smiling 
Knowing that I wouldn't fly 
 
And again, this one to a tune similar to'Yet Another Movie' 
 
here on the road 
here onthe road to nowhere 
without a hope 
(what is hope?) 
without a prayer 
(borrowed prayer) 
a kamikaze game 
of truth or dare 
 
Cripes dreams are so disturbing and surreal.
787
posted on 
10/16/2003 7:32:59 AM PDT
by 
Darksheare
(Resistance is futile, but we may be placated with chocolates and shiny trinkets to add to our hord.)
 
To: Flurry; snippy_about_it; SAMWolf; Darksheare; Darkchylde; radu; Trikebuilder; carlo3b; All
    
  
   
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                  | My Blue Dance 
                             For my dance I decided upon
blue satin over antique white lace
I wanted to wear you
on my skin
breathe air filled with you
seduce you with smoky eyes
and slow music
want you until 
you became the music
and the fabric...
I wear you well
 bentfeather ©02/07/03
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To: Flurry
    Jim Morrison of the Doors was a poet first and a lyricist after.
  I think this is so true for many lyricists.
 
To: bentfeather
    I was a lyricist first then a rhymy poemist. I want a tune writer. Maybe I should move to Nashville for a year and either make or break.
790
posted on 
10/16/2003 7:59:07 AM PDT
by 
Conspiracy Guy
(On October 11, 2003 I asked Laura Earl to be my wife.  "Well sure, I mean, I guess", was her answer.)
 
To: bentfeather
    ooh feather, I like that one cuz I've got some blue satin of my own and dreams like that. :)
 
791
posted on 
10/16/2003 8:00:08 AM PDT
by 
snippy_about_it
(Fall in --> The FReeper Foxhole. America's History. America's Soul.)
 
To: bentfeather; snippy_about_it; Flurry; Darksheare; Darkchylde; Trikebuilder; All
    Good Morning Everybody.
  

   
 
 Coffee & Donuts  
 
792
posted on 
10/16/2003 8:01:55 AM PDT
by 
SAMWolf
(A day without sunshine is like night.)
 
To: snippy_about_it; bentfeather; All
    Bees 
  

  
 The vibrant hum, the steady throb
 Of bees upon the wing
 Would cheer the keeper of the bees
 And make his heart to sing
 Their line of flight from hive to flowers
 With tempo still increasing
 As back and forth with burden sweet
 Of nature's store increasing
  
 First the golden yield of spring
 Coming from the sweetest clover
 In song and poem finds a place
 And renown the whole world over
 Later the field of action lies
 Where grows the buckwheat brown
 The delight of every village child
 And sold in every town
  
 I'll warrant if you read the scrolls
 Of sages long since dead
 The magic story of the bee
 Runs like a golden thread
 A living thread romantic
 So that neither you nor I
 Can tell God's purpose in the bees
 Nor find the reason why
  
 With all of man's inventions
 It still remains unknown
 To make by any technique
 A perfect honey comb
 They mystic spread of pollen
 Which makes the fruits to grow
 Is carried thither by the bees
 While humans seek to know
  
 From whence the creative force
 That puzzles every head
 With new life springing from the old
 We find our daily bread
 Yet man goes on his wilful way
 With little thought for these
 Nor even thinks how life depends
 On the work of busy bees.
  
 Ethel Littlemore 
 
793
posted on 
10/16/2003 8:03:02 AM PDT
by 
SAMWolf
(A day without sunshine is like night.)
 
To: Darksheare
    You shoved me, wingless 
 Out into the darkened sky 
 cruelly smiling 
 Knowing that I wouldn't fly 
  Why? 
 You knew you were my wings
 I, in shadow, knew, you would
 cause me to free float
 Yet, I believed that you in
 gossamer gloaming
 would not let me go
 You promised me...
 Star filled eyes and grandeur
 were the grease paint
 of your charisma
 and your chivalry
 a cacophony of night music
 bedazzled my longing eyes
 filled aching arms with form
 Now a ghost of mirage
 haunting my free floating...
 You knew...why???
 
 bentfeather ©
 10/16/2003
 
To: SAMWolf
    Nice poem today. Where did you dig up that music from? The only one I've ever heard from today's selection is 'See you in September'. LOL. Good morning SAM.
795
posted on 
10/16/2003 8:11:07 AM PDT
by 
snippy_about_it
(Fall in --> The FReeper Foxhole. America's History. America's Soul.)
 
To: snippy_about_it
    Beautiful snippy!!! You look absolutely marvelous! 
 
Keep dreaming snippy, never stop dreaming.
To: SAMWolf
    Bees 
 Ethel Littlemore 
 
 Sam, 
 Good morning!!
 Absolutely delightful poem!
 Thanks so much !!
 How's Dad this A.M.?
To: snippy_about_it
    You never heard Green Door!! Ivory Tower was one of my Mom's favorite songs when I was a kid. She still has the 78 rpm record of it.
798
posted on 
10/16/2003 8:17:20 AM PDT
by 
SAMWolf
(A day without sunshine is like night.)
 
To: SAMWolf
    Morning Sam. Morning Ralph.
799
posted on 
10/16/2003 8:17:57 AM PDT
by 
Conspiracy Guy
(On October 11, 2003 I asked Laura Earl to be my wife.  "Well sure, I mean, I guess", was her answer.)
 
To: bentfeather
    Thank you feather.
Keep dreaming snippy, never stop dreaming.
After all these years it's not possible to stop. I just won't!! LOL.
800
posted on 
10/16/2003 8:18:46 AM PDT
by 
snippy_about_it
(Fall in --> The FReeper Foxhole. America's History. America's Soul.)
 
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