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To: All; JustAmy; MistyCA; Victoria Delsoul; Billie; ST.LOUIE1; Mama_Bear; Pippin; Sabertooth; ...
Hello everyone! My muse showed up around 3 a.m. and inspired the following. (I warn you in advance that my muse is a bit strange.)

Is there any coffee left?



Royal Pain

In this rhyme, I'll tell you a story
of two seekers of fame and glory
one wants to be royal
the other so loyal
if you cross them, you'll soon be sorry.

The pretender who needs adulation
now professes victimization
'I did not solicit
a thing deemed illicit'
claims she with much indignation.

And then to her consternation
the record shows impersonation
you must have no mind
(or be one of her kind)
to believe any of her proclamations.

Hiding the truth, she tries to deflect
onto those whose trust she's wrecked
and her minions so spiteful
find the task delightful
at all cost, the queen they protect.

These witches with a sick malediction
(a shrink would call it projection)
through anonymous names
they play evil games
and their charges are nothing but fiction.

But this pair made a miscalculation
with their unjustified provocations
their fate is sealed,
the truth soon revealed
they can just wait with trepidation.

© AntiJen 2003



76 posted on 09/24/2003 10:03:38 AM PDT by Jen (Support our troops! Share the news of our military's successes that the liberal media won't report.)
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To: AntiJen
Seems my inspiration made a detour on it's way back here.
It was with your muse.
We'll see if it remains, and if you're permanently infected.
77 posted on 09/24/2003 10:07:01 AM PDT by Darksheare (This tagline exploits third world lint cartels and two hamsters in an exercise wheel.)
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To: AntiJen; dansangel
Thank you for the poems!!

Looking forward to more from you in the future. Amy
78 posted on 09/24/2003 10:07:28 AM PDT by JustAmy (God Bless our Military, Past and Present. Thank a Veteran for your FReedoms!)
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To: AntiJen
they can just wait with trepidation.

Bwahahahahah! But tell us how you *really* feel!

:-)

Great poem! Looks like you were in the same mindset as I when I wrote "Bitterness" posted yesterday.

80 posted on 09/24/2003 10:12:33 AM PDT by dansangel (*Visualize No Democrats*)
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To: AntiJen
Awesome work, Jen! That was well worth the wait!
89 posted on 09/24/2003 10:34:19 AM PDT by MistyCA (For some...it's always going to be "A Nam Thing!")
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To: AntiJen
Hi, Jen. What a regal poem, colors and all! :)
117 posted on 09/24/2003 11:46:42 AM PDT by Billie
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To: AntiJen
Royal Pain

LOL!!!!

171 posted on 09/24/2003 3:12:45 PM PDT by ST.LOUIE1
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To: AntiJen; JustAmy; MistyCA; Sabertooth; Billie; ST.LOUIE1; All
Woohoo!!!!!! Oh Jen, that's fabulous. Wowowow!! I love it.

If I may add this humble little poem, with many thanks to Saber for his help…






Wicked witches on the run,
Melting! Melting! Lots of fun!
It’s time to clean the neighborhood,
Their words and ways are just no good.

So let them keep on playing
At their nasty naggy braying,
Unaware what future looms,
To sweep away their bitter brooms.




189 posted on 09/24/2003 4:57:41 PM PDT by Victoria Delsoul (This is not about Tom. The objective, is to remove Davis. The purpose, is the change of governance)
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