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~The Dragon Flies Lair~
Poets
 | August 27, 2003
 | bentfeather
Posted on 08/27/2003 5:11:10 PM PDT by Soaring Feather
  
   
    
     
      
       
        
         
          
           
            
             
              
               
                
                 
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                   My Dragon Fly and Me   
                            
                            
                           
                          
                             If I could be a Dragon Fly   and wing my way through the sky   I would never be shy   just me and my Dragon Fly!  
                           By moonlight we ride the wind   chase the comets tail for fun   by day we would hide from the sun   our fragile wings would come undone  
                            On darkest nights we would use   fireflies as our guides   we would dip and we would glide   through the heavens open wide   and scatter diamonds in the night sky  my Dragon Fly and I... 
                            And we would wing past our lovers   silent in the night...   to kiss their face in our flight   much to their surprise and delight   my Dragon Fly and me in sight...  
                            Such a view do we share   away up here in the air   of breezes soft through our hair   my Dragon Fly and me a pair...  
                           bentfeather© 
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TOPICS: Poetry
KEYWORDS: freeverse; haiku; michaeldobbs; poems; poetry; poets
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To: SAMWolf
    Awwwwww you are just, too, good to me Sam!!! :-)
361
posted on 
09/17/2003 1:00:48 PM PDT
by 
Soaring Feather
(~ Good Day All ~ Dream A Little ~ Love A Lot ~)
 
To: bentfeather
    I never critique another's work. Poetry like art comes from the heart of the creator. I do a lot of silly poems and some serious. I stay away from the dark foreboding work because I try to make other's laugh or think. I don't like to make other's dread. Thanks.
362
posted on 
09/17/2003 1:04:31 PM PDT
by 
Conspiracy Guy
(Living fast is fine as long as you steer well and have good brakes.)
 
To: SAMWolf
    I stay away from the artsy side except to do satire. I like to use everyday words instead of "Saffron". I like to talk eye to eye with the reader not down. I do it for mental excercise and fun. Sometimes I'm lightly serious.
363
posted on 
09/17/2003 1:19:00 PM PDT
by 
Conspiracy Guy
(Living fast is fine as long as you steer well and have good brakes.)
 
To: Flurry
     I like to use everyday words instead of "Saffron".LOL!
 I like to talk eye to eye with the reader not down.
I think that was the one thing that bugged me about most poetry as a kid, I always felt like I was being talked down to, like the writer somehow was "superior" because he/she could write poetry.
 
364
posted on 
09/17/2003 1:26:01 PM PDT
by 
SAMWolf
(Schizophrenia beats being alone.)
 
To: SAMWolf
    yep. I use slang, snippets, whatever it takes. People who read my stuff say, "Dang I could have written that".
365
posted on 
09/17/2003 1:28:40 PM PDT
by 
Conspiracy Guy
(Living fast is fine as long as you steer well and have good brakes.)
 
To: Flurry
    I've only tried a few poems and pretty much limited it to haiku. It seems the easiest for me. I really like to find others poetry that I like and share it.
366
posted on 
09/17/2003 1:31:19 PM PDT
by 
SAMWolf
(Schizophrenia beats being alone.)
 
To: Flurry; SAMWolf; snippy_about_it; Victoria Delsoul; Trikebuilder; HairOfTheDog; Samwise; carlo3b; ..
    
My world
 a silent symphony of love
 becomes lost when you fear
 my whispers will end
 as love bringing confusion...
 
 
367
posted on 
09/17/2003 1:35:56 PM PDT
by 
Soaring Feather
(~ Good Day All ~ Dream A Little ~ Love A Lot ~)
 
To: bentfeather
    Don't forget, you can try to find a hotel with a business office or a bar with internet access and a library. That's what SAM and I did in San Diego and I know SAM used the library while on a camping trip once. 
 
Otherwise, I hope your wireless behaves. 
 
Take care.
368
posted on 
09/17/2003 1:46:49 PM PDT
by 
snippy_about_it
(The FReeper Foxhole. America's History. America's Soul.)
 
To: bentfeather
    Take me backTake me back my lover, won't you please take me home
Will you really say it's over, I can't live a life alone
I'll make it up to you my baby, if you give me one more try
I've got so much to lose with you, don't let our love just die
What have I done to our lives, what have I done to our tomorrows
How could I face another light, with all this pain and sorrow
Could you find it in your heart to forgive me, just one more time
Or will it rain each day in both of our lives, and the sun no longer shine
Take me back baby
I'll come if you ask
Can't we just go on from here, my dear, and put it in the past
Won't you please forgive me baby, how could I've been so blind
Is it going to end like this, and simply be no more
How could you walk away from me, my love, and forever close the door
Take me back baby
I'll do as you say
Take me back my lover, won't you please take me home
Will you really say it's over, I can't live a life alone
I'll make it up to you my baby, if you give me one more try
I've got so much to lose with you, don't let our love just die
Can you make me any sadder, then by keeping us apart
Will it ever be the same again, can't we make a fresh new start
Will you look at all the pain, don't you see I love you so
Is this the end for us my dear, can't you please just let it go
Take me back baby
I'll come if you ask
We had so much we shared how could you really go away
Will it ever be the same my dear, can't we start a brand new day
How could it just end like this, and simply be no more
How could you walk away from me, my love, and forever close the door
Take me back baby
I'll come if you ask
Take me back my lover, won't you please take me home
Will you really say it's over, I can't live a life alone
I'll make it up to you my baby, if you give me one more try
I've got so much to lose with you, don't let our love just die
 
369
posted on 
09/17/2003 3:27:18 PM PDT
by 
carlo3b
(http://www.CookingWithCarlo.com)
 
To: bentfeather
    lovely! My favorite poem I wrote at 6. It goes, "Your Face!" See ya later.
370
posted on 
09/17/2003 5:43:50 PM PDT
by 
Conspiracy Guy
(Living fast is fine as long as you steer well and have good brakes.)
 
To: bentfeather
    Not quite awake yet 
No poetry comes to mind 
Good morning feather
371
posted on 
09/18/2003 3:24:20 AM PDT
by 
snippy_about_it
(Fall in --> The FReeper Foxhole. America's History. America's Soul.)
 
To: SAMWolf; bentfeather
    The Dragon Flies Lair 
This is where poetry lives 
Good Morning SAMWolf
372
posted on 
09/18/2003 3:27:17 AM PDT
by 
snippy_about_it
(Fall in --> The FReeper Foxhole. America's History. America's Soul.)
 
To: snippy_about_it; bentfeather; Victoria Delsoul; Darkchylde
    Good Morning Everybody.
  

   
 
 Coffee & Donuts  
 
373
posted on 
09/18/2003 7:31:18 AM PDT
by 
SAMWolf
(Teamwork is vital. It gives you someone to blame.)
 
To: snippy_about_it
    You beat me to the Lair this morning and with Haiku!
374
posted on 
09/18/2003 7:33:27 AM PDT
by 
SAMWolf
(Teamwork is vital. It gives you someone to blame.)
 
To: bentfeather; snippy_about_it; Flurry
    NIGHTSHIFT, 1946  In the steamy heat and the noise 
 Of the turning belts and spinning cylinders 
 That drove the cranky and endless flow of paper 
 We busted ass seven days a weeks 
 For enough to live our small-town lives. 
 Laughing and swearing 
 We bullshitted while we worked, 
 About The Bulge and Omaha Beach, 
 Iwo and Leyte Gulf,
 Flak and fighters and burning cities. 
 Managers gone for the day, 
 Forman looking the other way, 
 We drank when we could find the time 
 Cheap whiskey, cheap wine 
 And beaucoup bottles of beer. 
 Swingshift or graveyard, 
 Laughing and bitching, 
 Drinking and bullshitting, 
 And busting ass. 
 Content in our simple world 
 Not awake to the wrongs around us. 
 Not worrying about the future. 
 Glad it was over. 
 Glad to be home. 
 Glad to have a job. 
 Glad to be alive.
 Gerald E. Swartz 
 artillery loader in western Europe
 C Battery 901st FA BN
 
375
posted on 
09/18/2003 7:36:33 AM PDT
by 
SAMWolf
(Teamwork is vital. It gives you someone to blame.)
 
To: SAMWolf
    It was in my head and I had to get it out!!!!! 
 
 
LOL. I do prefer being called to it by you and your music though. 
 
I'll just have to learn to be patient. ;)
376
posted on 
09/18/2003 7:37:05 AM PDT
by 
snippy_about_it
(Fall in --> The FReeper Foxhole. America's History. America's Soul.)
 
To: snippy_about_it
    I'll just have to get up earlier.
377
posted on 
09/18/2003 7:48:40 AM PDT
by 
SAMWolf
(Teamwork is vital. It gives you someone to blame.)
 
To: SAMWolf
    Another good one. If my mind wasn't absorbed in wedding, rehearsal tonight, the wedding tomorrow night. I'd write something. I must escort my little baby girl in white (she's 24). Until I beat the heck out of my future son in law. Just kidding I really like the kid and he has seen all my firearms and pratice targets.
378
posted on 
09/18/2003 8:06:13 AM PDT
by 
Conspiracy Guy
(Living fast is fine as long as you steer well and have good brakes.)
 
To: Flurry
    Congratulations to the NewlyWeds to be. 
379
posted on 
09/18/2003 8:09:07 AM PDT
by 
SAMWolf
(Teamwork is vital. It gives you someone to blame.)
 
To: SAMWolf
    I'm looking for Saturday morning. Everything around me reminds me that my little girl is grown up now. Hopefully the nerves will be cooled off Saturday morning.
380
posted on 
09/18/2003 8:21:37 AM PDT
by 
Conspiracy Guy
(Living fast is fine as long as you steer well and have good brakes.)
 
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