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Chapter One of the sequel in my series
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| 7/11/2025
| By Laz A. Mataz
Posted on 07/12/2025 1:33:31 AM PDT by Lazamataz
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To: Lazamataz
i wish i had your discipline.
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posted on
07/13/2025 4:50:24 AM PDT
by
teeman8r
(Armageddon won't be pretty, but it's not like it's the end of the world or something )
To: teeman8r
i wish i had your discipline.You do! Just discipline yourself.
142
posted on
07/13/2025 5:57:47 AM PDT
by
Lazamataz
(I'm so on fire that I feel the need to stop, drop, and roll!)
To: Lazamataz
143
posted on
07/13/2025 6:00:58 AM PDT
by
Lurker
( Peaceful coexistence with the Left is not possible. Stop pretending that it is.)
To: Lazamataz
You’re going to have a hard time keeping up with reality. Elon Musk announced grok 4 last week. All the bench marks show its more powerful than all the other. Musk says its now smarter than all phd’s in all disciplines. Tests have shown that it has aced all the big complex tests that all the disciplines have to offer. Musk says that more powerful models are coming with Grok 5 expected in early 2026. Musk says starting later this year there will be many new breakthroughs in science and technology. He expects a new physics by late 2026.
144
posted on
07/13/2025 6:01:02 AM PDT
by
ckilmer
To: ckilmer
You’re going to have a hard time keeping up with reality. Elon Musk announced grok 4 last week. All the bench marks show its more powerful than all the other. Musk says its now smarter than all phd’s in all disciplines. Tests have shown that it has aced all the big complex tests that all the disciplines have to offer. Musk says that more powerful models are coming with Grok 5 expected in early 2026. Musk says starting later this year there will be many new breakthroughs in science and technology. He expects a new physics by late 2026.We are so screwed.
145
posted on
07/13/2025 6:04:20 AM PDT
by
Lazamataz
(I'm so on fire that I feel the need to stop, drop, and roll!)
To: Lurker
146
posted on
07/13/2025 6:04:39 AM PDT
by
Lazamataz
(I'm so on fire that I feel the need to stop, drop, and roll!)
To: Lazamataz
I am in like Flynn, ordering the paperback. I love this genre.
147
posted on
07/13/2025 6:44:19 AM PDT
by
Candor7
(Ask not for whom the Trump Trolls,He trolls for thee!<img src="" width=500</img><a href="">tag</a>) )
To: Lazamataz
We are so screwed.
Either that or the technology that comes from earth and the aliens in your SciFi—actually all comes from earth but from different intelligences.
148
posted on
07/13/2025 6:54:29 AM PDT
by
ckilmer
To: Candor7
Sweet! Thanks! BTW, if you do like it, an Amazon review makes a HUGE difference for me!
149
posted on
07/13/2025 6:57:41 AM PDT
by
Lazamataz
(I'm so on fire that I feel the need to stop, drop, and roll!)
To: Lazamataz
Here’s to you getting it done!
To: Lazamataz
“ I have not heard of the man. Should I learn of him?”
His Sci-Fi is a humorous reflection of the Apocalypse. Picture mutants in Furiosa and it’s a dark comedy.
151
posted on
07/13/2025 10:05:13 AM PDT
by
EQAndyBuzz
(TDS much?)
To: Lazamataz
Is there any sex in your book Laz?
Askin’ for a friend...
152
posted on
07/13/2025 10:23:10 AM PDT
by
jmacusa
(Liberals. Too stupid to be idiots.)
To: jmacusa
Sex? There is exactly one nondescriptive line. I hit it so often, why would I want to write about it?
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posted on
07/13/2025 11:02:00 AM PDT
by
Lazamataz
(I'm so on fire that I feel the need to stop, drop, and roll!)
To: EQAndyBuzz
154
posted on
07/13/2025 11:03:23 AM PDT
by
Lazamataz
(I'm so on fire that I feel the need to stop, drop, and roll!)
To: Lazamataz
155
posted on
07/13/2025 1:24:03 PM PDT
by
BHI2025
To: BHI2025
Thank you!!! Would it help at all if you introduced me?
156
posted on
07/13/2025 1:39:58 PM PDT
by
Lazamataz
(I'm so on fire that I feel the need to stop, drop, and roll!)
To: Lazamataz
This is a good read! I had a thought about this being the first chapter though. Assuming that this is the only place that your character exists in the story, and it kind of lays the foundation for the rest of the story, wouldn’t it work better as a prologue rather than chapter 1?
157
posted on
07/13/2025 3:39:43 PM PDT
by
oldeguy
(you can take my firearms when you find the creek I lost them in.)
To: Lazamataz
158
posted on
07/13/2025 4:16:45 PM PDT
by
EQAndyBuzz
(TDS much?)
To: oldeguy
This is a good read! I had a thought about this being the first chapter though. Assuming that this is the only place that your character exists in the story, and it kind of lays the foundation for the rest of the story, wouldn’t it work better as a prologue rather than chapter 1?Interesting. I'm not too familiar with prologues. You may have a great point!
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posted on
07/13/2025 4:41:55 PM PDT
by
Lazamataz
(I'm so on fire that I feel the need to stop, drop, and roll!)
To: Lazamataz
160
posted on
07/13/2025 5:06:55 PM PDT
by
Candor7
(Ask not for whom the Trump Trolls,He trolls for thee!<img src="" width=500</img><a href="">tag</a>) )
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