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Original Content | June 1, 2025 | by Laz A. Mataz

Posted on 06/01/2025 5:21:23 AM PDT by Lazamataz

Using AI to help write? The short answer is, I don't.

There is a person, Tim Boucher, who has used AI to write at least 97 books. That's impressive, but I would wager that if I got into reading one of them, it would be an intolerable slog that I wouldn't be able to get through.

That is because of my observations when getting AI to experimentally generate some fiction. Everything it writes is very hackneyed, very trite material. Everything always ends up positive, everyone is happy, there is little conflict or conflict resolution, and every character has the exact same voice.

I like my fiction to have current colloquial expressions, AI doesn't do that. I like to have little plot twists here and there, AI doesn't seem capable. When possible, I like to have my chapters end with a mike-drop sentence. AI hasn't been able to generate one of those.

I'm over 75% finished with my political-thriller / science-fiction novel, so I'm starting to think about leveraging AI to produce a book cover or promotional images and video shorts. Even there, the creativity seems constrained. You can readily identify images created by AI, they all have a certain subjective feel to them.

However, there is a place for automation. It isn't AI, exactly, but automated grammar and punctuation error-checking is a stellar function. It's caught a lot of my minor errors. Even then, sometimes, I'll take artistic license to have characters speak with a more 'real-life' tone, or to describe a circumstance with more punch.


TOPICS: Chit/Chat; Weird Stuff
KEYWORDS: ai; aiwriting; lazamatater; lazamataztheman
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To: Myrddin
The nature of the apps I was developing precluded ever letting an AI see the source, so I could not leverage that capability

Do like we did: Sandbox it.

81 posted on 06/01/2025 11:52:38 AM PDT by Lazamataz (I'm so on fire that I feel the need to stop, drop, and roll!)
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To: Lazamataz

Add me if I’m not already on it.


82 posted on 06/01/2025 12:46:56 PM PDT by sphinx
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To: teeman8r

Wow. You got that up fast. What did it take AI to build out your prompt — two minutes?

Laz has probably taken longer. Obviously he will be among the first to be replaced. But the big question is, how would we know?


83 posted on 06/01/2025 12:53:35 PM PDT by sphinx
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To: Lazamataz

The core LLM models are biased to be kind and supportive, not critical— even Grok has this limitation. Using these as tools in the real world will require removing that constraint and letting them be hyper-critical if you want them to be. You are right, if the LLM is not overflowing with praise, it may bear a close look.


84 posted on 06/01/2025 1:02:01 PM PDT by LambSlave
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To: Lazamataz
re. IKWYM! It's a total CF! NGL! LOL! I mean WTF! @TEOTD, WTH!

TL;DR

85 posted on 06/01/2025 1:03:58 PM PDT by ken in texas
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To: Lazamataz

There is one particular model — not ChatGPT — that is very good at finding passive voice and suggesting active voice changes.


86 posted on 06/01/2025 1:07:00 PM PDT by StAnDeliver (TrumpII)
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To: FreedomPoster; nathanbedford; DocRock; Nateman; Boardwalk; Ultra Sonic 007; dennisw; stockpirate; ..
You may have just gotten your first look at a Cephian.

The slang term for them is Squids.


87 posted on 06/01/2025 1:15:01 PM PDT by Lazamataz (I'm so on fire that I feel the need to stop, drop, and roll!)
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To: piytar; LambSlave; StAntKnee; HYPOCRACY; EEGator; Big Red Badger; Army Air Corps; Chickensoup; ...
You may have just gotten your first look at a Cephian.

The slang term for them is Squids.


88 posted on 06/01/2025 1:16:24 PM PDT by Lazamataz (I'm so on fire that I feel the need to stop, drop, and roll!)
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To: equaviator
"Yes. Although he wrote for National Lampoon, his “Foreigners Around The World” article (1976?) is outstanding."

Circa Parliament of Whores (1991), he was the Mark Twain of the moment -- he never came anywhere near HST's raw insight despite the "gonzo" label applied to PJ -- and just as suddenly, he wasn't. He got too chummy with the Shrubbian neocons, and thought he was Hemingway in Kuwait.

89 posted on 06/01/2025 1:20:43 PM PDT by StAnDeliver (TrumpII)
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To: Lazamataz

Cthulhu Lite.


90 posted on 06/01/2025 1:24:58 PM PDT by StAnDeliver (TrumpII)
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To: StAnDeliver

Far from an Elder God, though. Sized about as we humans are. A simple individual from this extraterrestrial race.


91 posted on 06/01/2025 1:44:50 PM PDT by Lazamataz (I'm so on fire that I feel the need to stop, drop, and roll!)
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To: StAnDeliver; Lazamataz

My comment was going to be “Is that a juvenile Cthulhu?”

We’re on the same page.


92 posted on 06/01/2025 1:53:13 PM PDT by FreedomPoster (Islam delenda est)
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To: StAnDeliver

Would that ai be claude?


93 posted on 06/01/2025 2:27:17 PM PDT by Bob434 (Time flies like an arrow, fruit flies like a banana)
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To: Lazamataz

Their first translated message was, “Go Navy, Beat Army.”

/s


94 posted on 06/01/2025 2:31:26 PM PDT by HombreSecreto (The life of a repo man is always intense)
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To: StAnDeliver

Okay, but I still like PJ’s stuff from NL. I read a few of Thompson’s but to me, he wasn’t as humorous.


95 posted on 06/01/2025 2:34:20 PM PDT by equaviator (If 60 is the new 40 then 35 must be the new 15.)
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To: FreedomPoster; StAnDeliver

If you guys are getting a Cthulhu vibe, then I failed.


96 posted on 06/01/2025 2:34:34 PM PDT by Lazamataz (I'm so on fire that I feel the need to stop, drop, and roll!)
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To: equaviator

That’s entirely fair. Seeing a PJ article in the 80s highlighted on NL or RS cover stand, was the reason to buy NL or RS for the flight if you were standing in an airport.


97 posted on 06/01/2025 2:51:40 PM PDT by StAnDeliver (TrumpII)
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To: StAnDeliver; equaviator

Parliament of Whores and Holidays in Hell were both worthwhile books.


98 posted on 06/01/2025 3:08:20 PM PDT by FreedomPoster (Islam delenda est)
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To: Lazamataz

I tried to write an AI novel but all the characters were named Bob.

;)


99 posted on 06/01/2025 5:21:53 PM PDT by Adder (End fascism...defeat all Democrats.)
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To: Lazamataz
Do like we did: Sandbox it.

I would have needed a classified sandbox and tools to manage building 4 million lines of code. That wasn't in the original budget under the contract signed 5 years ago. I wasn't involved in the most recent proposal writing for the next contract, so I have no idea whether the option was considered. Just to add frosting on that cake, I'll be retiring June 8th, so I won't be actively involved anymore.

100 posted on 06/01/2025 5:27:25 PM PDT by Myrddin
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