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To: bagster; peteypupperdoo
Thanks for the shoutout

Iambic pentameter you need
For a limerick to properly read
The bow that you made, that was well played
Keep trying you will soon succeed

1,573 posted on 05/10/2021 6:08:36 AM PDT by hillarynot (I play in Peoria)
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To: hillarynot

?? Last line could be:
“Keep trying you soon will succeed” ??
Keeps the rhythm


1,575 posted on 05/10/2021 6:25:19 AM PDT by Cletus.D.Yokel (Patriots, stop looking at the politicians as enemies. Look at the complicit Legacy Media.)
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To: hillarynot
Iambic pentameter you need
For a limerick to properly read
The bow that you made, that was well played
Keep trying you will soon succeed

Oh, I know it wasn't a limerick. And I regretted not adding the last line, "I'm Bagster, that's who".

It was in the ballpark, though. I thought you'd be interested cause it was hilarious. And I wanted you to know you're not forgotten.


1,591 posted on 05/10/2021 7:00:07 AM PDT by bagster ("Even bad men love their mamas".)
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