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To: hillarynot
Iambic pentameter you need
For a limerick to properly read
The bow that you made, that was well played
Keep trying you will soon succeed

Oh, I know it wasn't a limerick. And I regretted not adding the last line, "I'm Bagster, that's who".

It was in the ballpark, though. I thought you'd be interested cause it was hilarious. And I wanted you to know you're not forgotten.


1,591 posted on 05/10/2021 7:00:07 AM PDT by bagster ("Even bad men love their mamas".)
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To: bagster

Branch. Covidian. Cult.
https://gab.com/SteveDeace/posts/106210859291842276


1,593 posted on 05/10/2021 7:02:46 AM PDT by Melian (Faithless is he that says farewell when the road darkens. ~ Gimli)
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To: bagster
And I wanted you to know you're not forgotten.

Thank you!! It was hilarious and I hope you don’t think I was being critical. Anytime I get a “prose” shoutout, I like to respond with a limerick. That was the best I could do on a Monday.

1,601 posted on 05/10/2021 7:33:18 AM PDT by hillarynot (I play in Peoria)
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To: bagster
Bags ole bean, try writing a poem that is the same in two languages.

Nous sommes du soleil
Les visages de les enfants
Le main de Dieu.

We are of the sun
The faces of the children
God's hand in us all.

I wrote that in my head years ago while listening to Nous Sommes du Soleil at a YES concert.

WWG1WGA

Garde la Foi, mes amis! Nous nous sommes les sauveurs de la République! Maintenant et Toujours!
(Keep the Faith, my friends! We are the saviors of the Republic! Now and Forever!)

LonePalm, le Républicain du verre cassé (The Broken Glass Republican)

1,698 posted on 05/10/2021 11:01:44 AM PDT by LonePalm (Commander and Chef)
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To: bagster

Don’t quit your day job....


1,767 posted on 05/10/2021 1:45:02 PM PDT by Bigg Red (Trump will be sworn in under a shower of confetti made from the tattered remains of the Rat Party.)
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