Posted on 06/17/2017 7:08:41 AM PDT by bray
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We are watching the meltdown of the civil society.
The Christian God has been banished from our culture, our schools, our government. Marxist Revisionism is rampant in Academia and the Media. What we are seeing is the inevitable result.
I am not optimistic. Things are going to get a lot worse.
A good article.
An editor could have doubled its effectiveness with little effort.
Make the sentences shorter.
Many of them could have easily been broken into two or three sentences.
Why don’t you post a better one?
Yes, Hodgkinson had an assassination list with 6 members of the House Freedom Caucus listed on it. Those are congressmen that are representing us, members of Free Republic! The conservative activism with the Tea Party movement in the early part of the Obama years was non-violent and for the Rochester, NY Tea Party rallies and marches, we had an action plan to react to violent leftist agitators in case they infiltrated our ranks at the rallies to make us look bad. There was no violence the Tea Party rallies except for that caused by leftist agitators and fake incidents that were manufactured by leftist politicians and MSM. The violence has always come from the left! They are the enemies of our Constitutional Republic and should be treated as such! There will be more violence from the left and I blame the effin' leftist politicians and MSM for ginning it up, the blood is on their hands!
I post all the time.
I get constructive criticism all the time.
I complimented the author first.
It ain’t a meltdown.
It is a ramp up.
My question is, will the next step be a Reichstag Fire or a Harper’s Ferry?
Take God out and Satan has free reign.
“We are watching the meltdown of this evil cult as they begin to realize they have been rejected by America.”
Some reject it; most libs still embrace it.
Good point, I need to fire the editor.
Amen
FWIW If you step away from your completed essay for an hour or two, then come back and read it carefully word for word, you’ll catch a lot of the spelling, grammar, and structure errors yourself. It’s a poor substitute for a good editor, but it helps.
Don’t fire him. He is doing a good job. Just improve him and he will do a better job.
good Brayin’!
FWIW If you step away from your completed essay for an hour or two, then come back and read it carefully word for word, you’ll catch a lot of the spelling, grammar, and structure errors yourself. It’s a poor substitute for a good editor, but it helps
I find that to be helpful. I always seem to find ways to improve an article when I re-read it.
I love it when some sites provide an editor for my articles. A good editor will improve the article 97% of the time.
I figure the other 3% is the price to pay for the positive 97%!
Interesting. Thanks for posting.
The timing of this assassination attempt is interesting:
Where is the Reality Winner story?
Quite so ... the obstruction and collusion cases are falling apart for lack of having any truth to them ... so Nutty McNutjob grabs his SKS and starts trying to kill people. And then winds up conveniently dead. Great distraction, no?
In all honesty I was pleased that the sentences were written for adults, rather than the pabulum of most writing today containing a half-thought per sentence.
To perdition with writing for the lowest common denominator.
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