[marktwain]

A good article.

An editor could have doubled its effectiveness with little effort.

Make the sentences shorter.

Many of them could have easily been broken into two or three sentences.

[old-ager]

Why don’t you post a better one?

[bray]

Good point, I need to fire the editor.

[Don W]

In all honesty I was pleased that the sentences were written for adults, rather than the pabulum of most writing today containing a half-thought per sentence.

To perdition with writing for the lowest common denominator.