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How To Write A Good Opus
blueunicorn6 | 5/13/2016 | blueunicorn6

Posted on 05/13/2016 8:35:57 AM PDT by blueunicorn6

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To: PGR88

Amazing. I guess it is a test of nerves. Sort of a whole-body version of Russian Roulette.


61 posted on 05/13/2016 4:03:06 PM PDT by Albion Wilde (In a time of universal deceit, telling the truth is a revolutionary act. --George Orwell)
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To: untenured
Ah, thank you for the ping. Yes, this is a topic not to be underestimated. It is, after all, the presumptive finale to one's public persona, and should be treated as the very acme of a number of emotions, some of which I shall list below. These need not all be addressed in the body of a single post - Libbylu's, for example, was a masterpiece of brevity and concision - but if your inchoate rage runs up against a case of writer's block worse than three bran muffins and a suicidal dose of Kaopectate, please feel free to employ the following list.

Item - invoke a sense of outrage. This need be no further away than the caps lock button - again, I reference Libbylu - but a sense of frenzy helps. Help the reader to visualize the spittle on your monitor and keyboard.

Item - invoke a sense of entitlement. Slightly embellished military service may help here: "I got my Medal of Honor with the oak leave cluster during my blimp service at the battle of Bok Choy, where Charlie blew off my arm, I grew it back, and then a Chechnyan sniper blew it off again, so don't you DARE criticize my opinion on the draft!" No one on FR will ever catch you, trust me, and anyway you'll be long gone by the time they do.

Item - invoke a sense of pathos. Remember, declining to post to an anonymous Internet forum is tearing your very heart from your body and leaving it bleeding on the imaginary floor, dammit! It's true that no one here actually knows you and it is likely that no one cares, and so your job as an opus author is to make us care, like forcing an intestinal worm pill down the gullet of an uncooperative cat.

Item - state that FR has changed. While this is certainly true at any given point in the gradual evolution of the collective neurosis that is our beloved website, it should be a change that is somehow intolerably repellent to someone who is, after all, coming here by free choice. Old-timers especially love "FR is no longer the civil, learned, congenial place it used to be." Be sure to open your windows when you post that - the shrieking of laughter that ensues might be your neighbors who have posted here longer than you have. No one who enjoyed the fevered dribblings of Toiletman or read with satisfaction Deb's immortal description of A+Bert as a "urine-soaked old rummy," can remain silent in the face of this sort of sanctimonious absurdity.

Item - project blamelessness. For example, if you have spent the last several months calling a political candidate not of your preference an ax-murdering po-faced swindler who sacrifices puppies to Satan (this may, actually refer to pretty much everyone in DC and certainly to everyone in journalism), and his followers brachycephalic cretins who belong in an institution learning to make brooms, be sure to state piously that you never said a bad word about anyone and anyway the other fellow started it. You won't be around to hear the collective sigh of relief upon your departure anyway.

Item - post drunk. What the hell, why change?

Item - invoke a sense of righteous vengeance. This site, the proprietor, the moderators, the ping lists, and the general membership will all be wearing virtual black armbands of mourning as soon as you deny them the nuggets of your wisdom that pepper your postings like fresh deer pellets on a dusty trail. Wey'll pay, damn us all, oh yes we will. We'll be begging you to come back. You know it's true.

The list above is by no means complete and categorical, it is merely intended to fill in those embarrassing lacunae in a stream of consciousness that make it gurgle like a terlit with air bubbles in the line when you give it that one last righteous flusheroo. It doesn't have to be perfect. The readers would be disappointed if it were.

62 posted on 05/13/2016 4:21:11 PM PDT by Billthedrill
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To: Billthedrill

awesome job! LMAO!


63 posted on 05/13/2016 4:30:29 PM PDT by bonfire
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To: Stentor

Oh I did, I just had to mess with OP. ‘Cuz I am that guy... :)


64 posted on 05/13/2016 6:52:09 PM PDT by AzSteven ("War is less costly than servitude, the choice is always between Verdun and Dachau." Jean Dutourd)
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To: blueunicorn6

I thought my opas were good.


65 posted on 05/13/2016 7:00:32 PM PDT by Larry Lucido
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To: Spunky

i have quite a collection of objects that women have thrown at me......corsages.......poetry books.....knives.


66 posted on 05/13/2016 7:15:51 PM PDT by blueunicorn6 ("A crack shot and a good dancer")
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To: Larry Lucido

Nobody can opa like you, Larry.


67 posted on 05/13/2016 7:17:35 PM PDT by blueunicorn6 ("A crack shot and a good dancer")
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To: blueunicorn6

If I leave in October, do I write an Octopus?


68 posted on 05/13/2016 7:22:06 PM PDT by Larry Lucido
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To: blueunicorn6
If FR had any "Employee of the Month"....you would be sooo close.

. Well done 😊

69 posted on 05/13/2016 7:32:48 PM PDT by ZinGirl (kids in college....can't afford a tagline right now)
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To: Larry Lucido

I’m going to try and make one of those faces out of characters.

><=#*^

I think I have a defective keyboard.


70 posted on 05/13/2016 7:37:17 PM PDT by blueunicorn6 ("A crack shot and a good dancer")
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To: blueunicorn6

Loved this!! Laughed heartily. Thanks.


71 posted on 05/13/2016 7:38:58 PM PDT by Jane Long (Go Trump, go! Make America Safe Again :)
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To: blueunicorn6

The plural isn’t opii?


72 posted on 05/13/2016 7:39:51 PM PDT by ViLaLuz (2 Chronicles 7:14)
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To: SMM48

libbylu set the opus standard. It was epic.
unfortunately, she kept coming back.


Right you are!! She left in a blaze of blue glory....the ultimate opus....then she hadda come back and diminish all of that great opi.


73 posted on 05/13/2016 7:40:25 PM PDT by Jane Long (Go Trump, go! Make America Safe Again :)
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To: blueunicorn6

Your opus is so good you should probably stay.

Remember that contrasts must be made to how good FReepers in the past were compared to us scum today. And don’t forget an overall aura of superiority. Those who write the timid “you all will never miss little old me” opi are creating self fulfilling prophecies.


74 posted on 05/13/2016 7:44:27 PM PDT by Yaelle (Tinkerbelle glittering up the runway for Trump Force One!)
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To: ZinGirl
Wow. It's like a whole new world opened up to me. Now, I can post a photo of me. 🐵 Should have shaved, I guess.
75 posted on 05/13/2016 7:48:47 PM PDT by blueunicorn6 ("A crack shot and a good dancer")
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To: blueunicorn6

THANKS FOR THIS INFO.

THE REASON I AM SHOUTING IS BECAUSE THE INTERNET SERVICE HAS BEEN VERY SPOTTY FROM THIS LEVEL OF HELL.


76 posted on 05/13/2016 7:49:13 PM PDT by exit82 (Road Runner sez:" Let's Make America Beeping Great Again! Beep! Beep!")
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To: ViLaLuz

I believe opii was Sheriff Taylor’s son.


77 posted on 05/13/2016 7:54:25 PM PDT by blueunicorn6 ("A crack shot and a good dancer")
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To: blueunicorn6
In your next literary excursion, perhaps you would consider expounding more fully and with opulent opiosity on how the rest of us left behind here should react and respond to the opuser.

I've always thought that at least for some of the opusers, a good response model for the rest of us here to follow might be the song performed in this youtube video, when someone made their grand final exit:

"Thank You Very Much"

78 posted on 05/13/2016 7:55:39 PM PDT by Heart-Rest ( "Woe to those who call evil good and good evil!" Isaiah 5:20)
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To: exit82

OK.

MAYBE YOU CAN HELP ME WIN A BET.

IS LBJ DOWN THERE WITH YOU?


79 posted on 05/13/2016 8:05:23 PM PDT by blueunicorn6 ("A crack shot and a good dancer")
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To: blueunicorn6

LBJ IS A MEMBER OF THE MANAGEMENT HERE.

HE’S ONE OF THOSE GUYS WHO PRICK YOU WITH THOSE TRIDENT-LIKE PRODS.

HIS TITLE IS THE HEAD PRICK.

HIS BOSS IS TED KENNEDY.


80 posted on 05/13/2016 8:17:15 PM PDT by exit82 (Road Runner sez:" Let's Make America Beeping Great Again! Beep! Beep!")
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