In my Lit class I have to create a Sonnet. I chose the Shakespearean model since it had to be in iambic pentameter and that is the easiest rhyming convention that I could work with. The Sonnet is 10 syllables per line. The Sonnet must be in the correct form and make a clear point.
How did I do? I offer three different ending couplets, which one sounds best. Any help is appreciated.
Thank You.
To: Typical_Whitey
Cute. Not great, but passable.
2 posted on
10/23/2012 2:53:45 PM PDT by
IronJack
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To: Typical_Whitey
I LOVE it. It’s great. I think I prefer your original ending, although all are good. Good work.
3 posted on
10/23/2012 3:22:36 PM PDT by
Auntie Mame
(Fear not tomorrow. God is already there.)
To: Typical_Whitey
I dislike poetry, especially Haiku and rap.
To: Typical_Whitey
First ending, definately. Nice.
7 posted on
10/23/2012 11:34:54 PM PDT by
MWestMom
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