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The Dragonflies' Lair~Thread~XXXV~March 25, 2007
March 25,2007 | Soaring Feather/Poets of the Lair

Posted on 03/25/2007 5:24:15 AM PDT by Soaring Feather



My Dragon Fly and Me



If I could be a Dragon Fly
and wing my way through the sky
I would never be shy
just me and my Dragon Fly!

By moonlight we ride the wind
chase the comets tail for fun
by day we would hide from the sun
our fragile wings would come undone

On darkest nights we would use
fireflies as our guide
we would dip and we would glide
through the heavens open wide
and scatter diamonds in the night sky
my Dragon Fly and me...

And we would wing past our lovers
silent in the night...
to kiss their face in our flight
much to their surprise and delight
my Dragon Fly and me in sight...

Such a view do we share
away up here in the air
of breezes soft through our hair
my Dragon Fly and me a pair...

bentfeather©
2002







TOPICS: Poetry
KEYWORDS: classicpoets; dragonflies; glengalyway; poetry
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To: Lady Jag

Nice picture and poem. The poem is a little deep.


521 posted on 04/04/2007 11:30:00 AM PDT by NY Attitude (You are responsible for your safety until the arrival of Law Enforcement Officers!)
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To: NY Attitude

Howdy NYA, actually the lousy weather has my attitude a tiny bit bent. It’s cold and raining, UGH!


522 posted on 04/04/2007 11:43:07 AM PDT by Soaring Feather (I Soar 'cause I can....)
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To: Soaring Feather

Sorry to hear that. On the bright side, it isn’t ice and snow.


523 posted on 04/04/2007 11:46:56 AM PDT by NY Attitude (You are responsible for your safety until the arrival of Law Enforcement Officers!)
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To: Soaring Feather

It is a good day to curl up with a book by the open hearth and eat some soup.


524 posted on 04/04/2007 11:48:02 AM PDT by NY Attitude (You are responsible for your safety until the arrival of Law Enforcement Officers!)
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To: Lady Jag

Interesting form, I had to look it up.

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Curtal_sonnet


525 posted on 04/04/2007 11:48:29 AM PDT by Soaring Feather (I Soar 'cause I can....)
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To: NY Attitude
Sorry to hear that. On the bright side, it isn’t ice and snow.
No, not yet. 80% of snow.

It is a good day to curl up with a book by the open hearth and eat some soup.
I am sick of soup, even my own. ;)
526 posted on 04/04/2007 11:50:26 AM PDT by Soaring Feather (I Soar 'cause I can....)
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To: NY Attitude

I agree. I was a little iffy on it.


527 posted on 04/04/2007 11:53:45 AM PDT by Lady Jag (I dreamed I surfed all day in my monthly donor wonder bra - https://secure.freerepublic.com/donate)
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To: Soaring Feather; NY Attitude

No, not yet. 80% chance of snow-coming today.


528 posted on 04/04/2007 11:55:36 AM PDT by Soaring Feather (I Soar 'cause I can....)
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To: Soaring Feather

I had trouble reading the style and appreciate your having looked it up. Looks too mathematical to me.

What does the expert feather have to say?


529 posted on 04/04/2007 11:56:35 AM PDT by Lady Jag (I dreamed I surfed all day in my monthly donor wonder bra - https://secure.freerepublic.com/donate)
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To: Lady Jag

OMG, I can’t do Math, and I hate structure to the core.

I do not know how anyone can get a poem out with all this stuff to worry about.

Haiku is as far as I will tread into a structured poem.


530 posted on 04/04/2007 12:00:36 PM PDT by Soaring Feather (I Soar 'cause I can....)
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To: Lady Jag; NY Attitude
Gerard Manley Hopkins-Creater of that form of Sonnet, probably would have been a rocket scientist in today’s world. ;)

A real nerd!
531 posted on 04/04/2007 12:06:23 PM PDT by Soaring Feather (I Soar 'cause I can....)
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To: Soaring Feather

Most likely he was a member of the Priory of Sion?


532 posted on 04/04/2007 12:13:24 PM PDT by NY Attitude (You are responsible for your safety until the arrival of Law Enforcement Officers!)
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To: NY Attitude

Here’s Wikipedia, says.

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Gerard_Manley_Hopkins


533 posted on 04/04/2007 12:20:05 PM PDT by Soaring Feather (I Soar 'cause I can....)
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To: All
Come, fill the Cup, and in the Fire of Spring
The Winter Garmet of Repentance fling
The Bird of Time has but a little way
To fly -- and Lo! The Bird is on the Wing.


The Moving Finger writes; and, having writ,
Moves on: nor all thy Piety nor Wit
Shall lure it back to cancel half a Line,
Nor all thy Tears wash out a Word of it.


- Rubáiyát of Omar Khayyám

534 posted on 04/04/2007 12:22:58 PM PDT by Soaring Feather (I Soar 'cause I can....)
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To: Lady Jag; NY Attitude
When March goes on forever,
And April's twice as long,
Who gives a damn if spring has come,
As long as winter's gone.


- R. L. Ruzicka

535 posted on 04/04/2007 12:25:41 PM PDT by Soaring Feather (I Soar 'cause I can....)
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To: Soaring Feather

Good! Thank you, I feel much better now.


536 posted on 04/04/2007 12:27:45 PM PDT by Lady Jag (I dreamed I surfed all day in my monthly donor wonder bra - https://secure.freerepublic.com/donate)
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To: Soaring Feather

Interesting. Thanks for posting.


537 posted on 04/04/2007 12:28:37 PM PDT by NY Attitude (You are responsible for your safety until the arrival of Law Enforcement Officers!)
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To: Soaring Feather
Escher was like that in art.


538 posted on 04/04/2007 12:38:53 PM PDT by Lady Jag (I dreamed I surfed all day in my monthly donor wonder bra - https://secure.freerepublic.com/donate)
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To: Lady Jag

Yes, so true, I am fond of his work.


539 posted on 04/04/2007 12:42:12 PM PDT by Soaring Feather (I Soar 'cause I can....)
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To: Soaring Feather
Someone animated one of his drawings:


540 posted on 04/04/2007 1:10:50 PM PDT by Lady Jag (I dreamed I surfed all day in my monthly donor wonder bra - https://secure.freerepublic.com/donate)
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