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To: pcottraux

Editing is the part I hate most. I don't mind trimming the fat from a sentence, to find a better way to convey a thought, but when it comes to taking out whole paragraphs or scenes, I really have a problem.


306 posted on 12/11/2005 11:06:49 PM PST by Rainbow Rising (Flag on the moon. How did it get there?)
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To: Rainbow Rising

Same here. I do not like removing whole paragraphs or scenes. I had to the few times I posted an excrept to this forum I had to edit (heavy violence and some swearing) and those were the mild parts (it is NOT family freindly lol). But it is a sci-fi/war/military-thriller so such content adds realism and depth.


308 posted on 12/11/2005 11:11:09 PM PST by Paul_Denton (The U.S. should adopt the policy of Oom Shmoom: Israeli policy where no one gives a sh*t about U.N.)
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To: Rainbow Rising

I misread: I only had it down to 4 1/4 pages. Now it's at 4.

Stupid long vanity static.


309 posted on 12/11/2005 11:13:36 PM PST by pcottraux (It's pronounced "P. Coe-troe.")
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