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The Hobbit Hole XXV - Fare you well! Fare you well!
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Posted on 10/15/2005 7:13:08 AM PDT by HairOfTheDog

Welcome to The Hobbit Hole!

Fare you well! Fare you well!

New verse:

Upon the hearth the fire is red,
Beneath the roof there is a bed;
But not yet weary are our feet,
Still round the corner we may meet
A sudden tree or standing stone
That none have seen but we alone.
Tree and flower and leaf and grass,
Let them pass! Let them pass!
Hill and water under sky,
Pass them by! Pass them by!

Still round the corner there may wait
A new road or a secret gate,
And though we pass them by today,
Tomorrow we may come this way
And take the hidden paths that run
Towards the Moon or to the Sun.
Apple, thorn, and nut and sloe,
Let them go! Let them go!
Sand and stone and pool and dell,
Fare you well! Fare you well!

Home is behind, the world ahead,
And there are many paths to tread
Through shadows to the edge of night,
Until the stars are all alight.
Then world behind and home ahead,
We’ll wander back to home and bed.
Mist and twilight, cloud and shade,
Away shall fade! Away shall fade!
Fire and lamp, and meat and bread,
And then to bed! And then to bed!

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To: Corin Stormhands
Sure, but you probably can't count the number of times you have met her and the number of times you have talked to her on the phone on the one hand.
3,441 posted on 11/02/2005 9:12:10 AM PST by TalonDJ
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To: TalonDJ

Well, we can fix the second one pretty easily...

Ack! a virus-ridden laptop of DOOOM has ruined my chance of a NaNo lunch.


3,442 posted on 11/02/2005 9:26:50 AM PST by JenB (NaNoWriMo Word Count: 4,400)
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To: TalonDJ; JenB; RosieCotton; Rose in RoseBear; SuziQ; Lil'freeper; RMDupree; Overtaxed

RATS! RATS! RATS!

So I'm writing during lunch and I wonder why the "MacKenzie" name sounds so familiar. It's the name of Lana Turner's character in "Peyton Place."

Oh well, it's sticking and we'll change it in editing after November 30...


3,443 posted on 11/02/2005 9:36:00 AM PST by Corin Stormhands (VIRGINIA FREEPERS - Join the 72 Hour GOTV for Jerry Kilgore! ~ www.jerrykilgore.com)
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To: Corin Stormhands

Er, who, who, and what?


3,444 posted on 11/02/2005 9:39:28 AM PST by JenB (NaNoWriMo Word Count: 4,400)
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To: Corin Stormhands

'find & replace' fixes all.

It's a common enough name to keep I think.


3,445 posted on 11/02/2005 9:42:02 AM PST by TalonDJ
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To: TalonDJ

Yeah, I may keep it. I don't have a better one at this point.


3,446 posted on 11/02/2005 9:47:22 AM PST by Corin Stormhands (VIRGINIA FREEPERS - Join the 72 Hour GOTV for Jerry Kilgore! ~ www.jerrykilgore.com)
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To: Corin Stormhands
Just call it an homage... or a pastiche.
3,447 posted on 11/02/2005 9:51:18 AM PST by Bear_in_RoseBear
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To: TalonDJ

Blowing leaves outside are driving the cats nut. And typing nano 1 haned is only slowing down my lunch eating *munch*munch*


3,448 posted on 11/02/2005 9:51:26 AM PST by TalonDJ
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To: Bear_in_RoseBear; JenB; RosieCotton; TalonDJ; RMDupree; Lil'freeper; Overtaxed
Just call it an homage... or a pastiche.

I just don't want it called plagiarism.

3425 words.

cheese sandwich - check
Guido - check

3,449 posted on 11/02/2005 10:04:47 AM PST by Corin Stormhands (VIRGINIA FREEPERS - Join the 72 Hour GOTV for Jerry Kilgore! ~ www.jerrykilgore.com)
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To: RMDupree
LF - speaking of excerpts...c'mon girl, post sumthin'!

Done! Minor character takes a leak and everyone dies. (It's the only scene I have handy here at work.)

3,450 posted on 11/02/2005 10:09:44 AM PST by Lil'freeper (4735/45265)
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To: Corin Stormhands
Cheese sandwich?

Ack! I can't keep up. I've got my Guido already, tho.

3,451 posted on 11/02/2005 10:10:29 AM PST by Lil'freeper (4735/45265)
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To: Corin Stormhands

4469 words. Turned out the death-laptop can't be fixed today so I get lunch after all. Aloe plant. Check.

Think I'll do the toaster in the next scene.


3,452 posted on 11/02/2005 10:11:10 AM PST by JenB (NaNoWriMo Word Count: 4,400)
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To: Lil'freeper; JenB; RosieCotton; TalonDJ; RMDupree; Rose in RoseBear; Overtaxed
AFAIK, these are the "required" elements.

Guido
cheese sandwich
toaster
badger
aloe plant
ninja
llama

Am I missing any? And, FWIW, I think now that we've started, we have to stop adding to the list.

I enjoyed writing the following:

It wasn’t always that way. A distant relative ran the other white funeral home in town. But somewhere in the 1920s there was an incident. No one knew the exact details of the incident, but it involved, in no particular order, a hearse, a young lady, moonshine and fried chicken. The MacKenzie family had taken their dead to Giordano’s ever since.

I just realized, I could have put the entire list in right there...

3,453 posted on 11/02/2005 10:15:44 AM PST by Corin Stormhands (VIRGINIA FREEPERS - Join the 72 Hour GOTV for Jerry Kilgore! ~ www.jerrykilgore.com)
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To: Corin Stormhands

Bonus points if the ninja and the llama are the same.


3,454 posted on 11/02/2005 10:18:45 AM PST by JenB (NaNoWriMo Word Count: 4,400)
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To: Corin Stormhands

You ought to read Janet Evanovich's 'Stephanie Plum' novels - funeral homes play a major role in the social circles of the aged. ;P


3,455 posted on 11/02/2005 10:20:02 AM PST by Lil'freeper (4735/45265)
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To: Lil'freeper

Sounds like chick lit.

Guido Giordano's funeral home is not a central part of the story.

I had to bury the corpse.

I had to use "Guido."


3,456 posted on 11/02/2005 10:22:20 AM PST by Corin Stormhands (VIRGINIA FREEPERS - Join the 72 Hour GOTV for Jerry Kilgore! ~ www.jerrykilgore.com)
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To: Corin Stormhands

Side-splitting funny and irreverant chick-lit. I used one of Evanovich's character names for my Guido - Guido Morelli the fashion designer. Evanovich's Joe Morelli is a hunk of yummy hot stuff.


3,457 posted on 11/02/2005 10:24:47 AM PST by Lil'freeper (4735/45265)
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To: Corin Stormhands
“How about a turkey and cheese sandwich?” she offered.
“Sure. Be careful of the toaster, though. It’s evil, if you don’t watch it you’ll get burned.”

Does that count for the toaster? How about the cheese sandwich?

3,458 posted on 11/02/2005 10:25:00 AM PST by JenB (NaNoWriMo Word Count: 4,400)
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To: Lil'freeper

Mine is still ~supposed~ to be serious drama. But I want some of the quirkier aspects of southernors to show thru.


3,459 posted on 11/02/2005 10:26:06 AM PST by Corin Stormhands (VIRGINIA FREEPERS - Join the 72 Hour GOTV for Jerry Kilgore! ~ www.jerrykilgore.com)
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To: Corin Stormhands

Where did the cheese sandwich come from?


3,460 posted on 11/02/2005 10:26:55 AM PST by Overtaxed (It was a dark and stormy night)
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