Posted on 11/24/2003 9:52:48 AM PST by January24th
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The paths of portmeirion
all lead to the sea
not all prisons
are unpleasant
nor all
unpleasantness
a prison.
What serves the goose
and serves the gander
reductio ad absurdum
the sauce by heat
made concentrate
renders savoury
the platter
And whether fish
or fowl the dish
we care not
when we partake
cause its the same
for girl or man
the fire extracts
our self absorbtion
and tasty juices
by heat reduced,
regardless of our gender.
Saucy and seductive
lines are blurred
by the saturated senses
cooking is sexy
and sex is
delicious
either way
a recipe for disaster
or delight...
john kerry declared his election
would result in historic perfection
of an u.n. malise
we can just count the days
'til our laws are an e.u. refelection
koffi with cream
barter's economy is crude
when humanity trades oil for food
but the barrons of blight
can pocket the bite,
and the little guy always gets screwed.
some art
just shines
sun silent
naturally imbued
with hues
as hard to find
as true love
some nights
the lagubrians
seranade
the paranoids
with songs
of past future
tense
some nights
are just seranade
most days are
songs from yesterday
I need the music
of the stars
and romance in
black velvet dance.
If I was a Freepin Toad
Who dance-ed like Nijinsky
I would have a ballet wrote
by Igor I Stravinsky
Not sure what your poem means
not sure why you wrote it
's got metre, rhyme and silly scenes
past that, I hardly note it
:o)
my very first recognition as a poet !!!
thanks
It's a pleasure to encourage the young fledglings...
Welcome, btw.
stravinsky was a clever guy
'haps brillant is the word
when he composed you can't deny
you heard a firebird
peasantries
drilling in anwr, the liberals resist
our back yards too beautiful they insist
with kerrys fuel for his yacht
bought from third world despots
theyre all crypto colonialists.
short sheet
lacking a utopian
vision cats
recline upon
roofless columns
coloseum tigers
declining to roam
To paint well is simply this: to put the right color in the right place. Paul Klee
either, other
its not
just about
colour, but
the chemistry
of our light
that sounds
chromatic chords
when contrasts
vibrate.
either, other
Lovely work.
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