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~The Dragon Flies' Lair IV~
November 7, 2003
| bentfeather
Posted on 11/07/2003 5:42:23 AM PST by Soaring Feather
My Dragon Fly and Me
If I could be a Dragon Fly and wing my way through the sky I would never be shy just me and my Dragon Fly!
By moonlight we ride the wind chase the comets tail for fun by day we would hide from the sun our fragile wings would come undone
On darkest nights we would use fireflies as our guide we would dip and we would glide through the heavens open wide and scatter diamonds in the night sky my Dragon Fly and I...
And we would wing past our lovers silent in the night... to kiss their face in our flight much to their surprise and delight my Dragon Fly and me in sight...
Such a view do we share away up here in the air of breezes soft through our hair my Dragon Fly and me a pair...
bentfeather©
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TOPICS: Poetry
KEYWORDS: freeverse; haiku; hobbies; michaeldobbs; poems; poets; prose
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To: Colonel_Flagg
We're glad to have you here. It is a wonderful place just waiting for us whenever we want.
641
posted on
11/20/2003 1:40:36 PM PST
by
snippy_about_it
(Fall in --> The FReeper Foxhole. America's History. America's Soul.)
To: Colonel_Flagg
Darn. Everyone writes poetry but me! Nice Colonel_Flagg.
642
posted on
11/20/2003 3:58:53 PM PST
by
SAMWolf
(100,000 lemmings can't be wrong.)
To: SAMWolf
Now SAM, you've written some haiku that's good. You can't help it if you don't have the soul of a .... oh, never mind. LOL.
You have many other wonderful qualities :)
643
posted on
11/20/2003 4:20:56 PM PST
by
snippy_about_it
(Fall in --> The FReeper Foxhole. America's History. America's Soul.)
To: snippy_about_it
You have many other wonderful qualities :)I do?
644
posted on
11/20/2003 4:29:27 PM PST
by
SAMWolf
(100,000 lemmings can't be wrong.)
To: SAMWolf
You have many other wonderful qualities :)I do?
LOL
How do I love thee
Let me count the ways....
You don't really want me to list them do you?
645
posted on
11/20/2003 6:05:23 PM PST
by
snippy_about_it
(Fall in --> The FReeper Foxhole. America's History. America's Soul.)
To: snippy_about_it
Short list. LOL
646
posted on
11/20/2003 6:06:12 PM PST
by
SAMWolf
(100,000 lemmings can't be wrong.)
To: SAMWolf
charming
647
posted on
11/20/2003 6:20:32 PM PST
by
snippy_about_it
(Fall in --> The FReeper Foxhole. America's History. America's Soul.)
To: snippy_about_it
See I told you it was a short list, LOL
648
posted on
11/20/2003 6:46:28 PM PST
by
SAMWolf
(100,000 lemmings can't be wrong.)
To: SAMWolf; snippy_about_it
SamWolf, don't you let me hear you say you can't write poetry!! I can prove that you can!! I know where it is!!
LOL
649
posted on
11/20/2003 6:56:19 PM PST
by
Soaring Feather
(I have a sword in my hand. I am a poet bentfeather.)
To: bentfeather
mine
#650
650
posted on
11/20/2003 6:56:58 PM PST
by
Soaring Feather
(I have a sword in my hand. I am a poet bentfeather.)
To: SAMWolf
I thought you were requesting the short list. LOL. Just look at the definition;
"a quality or combination of qualities that is wholly attractive and irresistible"
See, that covers all your qualities. :)
So there.
651
posted on
11/20/2003 6:58:37 PM PST
by
snippy_about_it
(Fall in --> The FReeper Foxhole. America's History. America's Soul.)
To: bentfeather
My stuff wasn't as good as the others and it's just mostly mediocre haiku. But I should get an "A" for at least trying, all the encouragement I got at the Belve helped me at least try and for that I'm thankful.
652
posted on
11/20/2003 6:58:51 PM PST
by
SAMWolf
(100,000 lemmings can't be wrong.)
To: SAMWolf
You get an A+ for doing, not trying.
I don't do Haiku, or some of the other forms of poetry.
I hate rules.
653
posted on
11/20/2003 7:01:13 PM PST
by
Soaring Feather
(I have a sword in my hand. I am a poet bentfeather.)
To: bentfeather
or some of the other forms of poetry. =any form other than free verse.
654
posted on
11/20/2003 7:03:43 PM PST
by
Soaring Feather
(I have a sword in my hand. I am a poet bentfeather.)
To: bentfeather
Snippy is really good at prose and you're good at free form. Haiku worked for me.
655
posted on
11/20/2003 7:08:54 PM PST
by
SAMWolf
(100,000 lemmings can't be wrong.)
To: SAMWolf; snippy_about_it; Darksheare; Flurry; radu; Colonel_Flagg; Old Sarge; Darkchylde
The Moor
A hollow whispering
on the moor
and
shadowy wind tunes
of your love
lies forgotten, etched
inside my empty night
bentfeather
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656
posted on
11/20/2003 7:21:05 PM PST
by
Soaring Feather
(I have a sword in my hand. I am a poet bentfeather.)
To: bentfeather
OvercastDark sky, no moon, no stars,
but not without you,
your warmth,
your eyes to light my way.
657
posted on
11/20/2003 7:29:39 PM PST
by
Old Sarge
(Serving YOU... on Operation Noble Eagle!)
To: bentfeather
Oh, my goodness. You paint a vivid mental picture with your words. :)
It appears that you've had the same thoughts I have had from time to time. Believe it or not, that's a comforting thing to know.
658
posted on
11/20/2003 7:42:43 PM PST
by
Colonel_Flagg
("The difference between a violin and a viola is that a viola burns longer." -- Victor Borge)
To: Old Sarge; Colonel_Flagg
Nice work Sarge.
Colonel, please join in on the writing.
Sarge, met Colonel Flagg
Cloudy Skies
like the color of
your eyes
moody blue
without you...
659
posted on
11/20/2003 7:51:31 PM PST
by
Soaring Feather
(I have a sword in my hand. I am a poet bentfeather.)
To: Colonel_Flagg
Thank You Colonel.
660
posted on
11/20/2003 7:52:11 PM PST
by
Soaring Feather
(I have a sword in my hand. I am a poet bentfeather.)
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