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~The Dragon Flies' Lair IV~
November 7, 2003
 | bentfeather
Posted on 11/07/2003 5:42:23 AM PST by Soaring Feather
  
   
    
     
      
       
        
         
          
           
            
             
              
               
                
                 
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                   My Dragon Fly and Me   
                            
                            
                           
                          
                             If I could be a Dragon Fly   and wing my way through the sky   I would never be shy   just me and my Dragon Fly!  
                           By moonlight we ride the wind   chase the comets tail for fun   by day we would hide from the sun   our fragile wings would come undone  
                            On darkest nights we would use   fireflies as our guide   we would dip and we would glide   through the heavens open wide   and scatter diamonds in the night sky  my Dragon Fly and I... 
                            And we would wing past our lovers   silent in the night...   to kiss their face in our flight   much to their surprise and delight   my Dragon Fly and me in sight...  
                            Such a view do we share   away up here in the air   of breezes soft through our hair   my Dragon Fly and me a pair...  
                           bentfeather© 
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TOPICS: Poetry
KEYWORDS: freeverse; haiku; hobbies; michaeldobbs; poems; poets; prose
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To: Colonel_Flagg
    We're glad to have you here. It is a wonderful place just waiting for us whenever we want.
641
posted on 
11/20/2003 1:40:36 PM PST
by 
snippy_about_it
(Fall in --> The FReeper Foxhole. America's History. America's Soul.)
 
To: Colonel_Flagg
    Darn. Everyone writes poetry but me! Nice Colonel_Flagg.
642
posted on 
11/20/2003 3:58:53 PM PST
by 
SAMWolf
(100,000 lemmings can't be wrong.)
 
To: SAMWolf
    Now SAM, you've written some haiku that's good. You can't help it if you don't have the soul of a .... oh, never mind. LOL.
 
 
You have many other wonderful qualities :)
643
posted on 
11/20/2003 4:20:56 PM PST
by 
snippy_about_it
(Fall in --> The FReeper Foxhole. America's History. America's Soul.)
 
To: snippy_about_it
    You have many other wonderful qualities :)I do?
 
644
posted on 
11/20/2003 4:29:27 PM PST
by 
SAMWolf
(100,000 lemmings can't be wrong.)
 
To: SAMWolf
    You have many other wonderful qualities :)I do?
LOL
 How do I love thee
 Let me count the ways....
 
 You don't really want me to list them do you?
 
645
posted on 
11/20/2003 6:05:23 PM PST
by 
snippy_about_it
(Fall in --> The FReeper Foxhole. America's History. America's Soul.)
 
To: snippy_about_it
    Short list. LOL
646
posted on 
11/20/2003 6:06:12 PM PST
by 
SAMWolf
(100,000 lemmings can't be wrong.)
 
To: SAMWolf
    charming 
 
 
 
 
647
posted on 
11/20/2003 6:20:32 PM PST
by 
snippy_about_it
(Fall in --> The FReeper Foxhole. America's History. America's Soul.)
 
To: snippy_about_it
    See I told you it was a short list, LOL
648
posted on 
11/20/2003 6:46:28 PM PST
by 
SAMWolf
(100,000 lemmings can't be wrong.)
 
To: SAMWolf; snippy_about_it
    SamWolf, don't you let me hear you say you can't write poetry!! I can prove that you can!! I know where it is!! 
 
LOL
649
posted on 
11/20/2003 6:56:19 PM PST
by 
Soaring Feather
(I have a sword in my hand. I am a poet bentfeather.)
 
To: bentfeather
    mine 
 
#650
650
posted on 
11/20/2003 6:56:58 PM PST
by 
Soaring Feather
(I have a sword in my hand. I am a poet bentfeather.)
 
To: SAMWolf
    I thought you were requesting the short list. LOL. Just look at the definition; 
 
"a quality or combination of qualities that is wholly attractive and irresistible" 
 
 
See, that covers all your qualities. :) 
 
So there. 
651
posted on 
11/20/2003 6:58:37 PM PST
by 
snippy_about_it
(Fall in --> The FReeper Foxhole. America's History. America's Soul.)
 
To: bentfeather
    My stuff wasn't as good as the others and it's just mostly mediocre haiku. But I should get an "A" for at least trying, all the encouragement I got at the Belve helped me at least try and for that I'm thankful.
652
posted on 
11/20/2003 6:58:51 PM PST
by 
SAMWolf
(100,000 lemmings can't be wrong.)
 
To: SAMWolf
    You get an A+ for doing, not trying. 
 
I don't do Haiku, or some of the other forms of poetry. 
 
I hate rules.
653
posted on 
11/20/2003 7:01:13 PM PST
by 
Soaring Feather
(I have a sword in my hand. I am a poet bentfeather.)
 
To: bentfeather
    or some of the other forms of poetry. =any form other than free verse.
654
posted on 
11/20/2003 7:03:43 PM PST
by 
Soaring Feather
(I have a sword in my hand. I am a poet bentfeather.)
 
To: bentfeather
    Snippy is really good at prose and you're good at free form. Haiku worked for me.
655
posted on 
11/20/2003 7:08:54 PM PST
by 
SAMWolf
(100,000 lemmings can't be wrong.)
 
To: SAMWolf; snippy_about_it; Darksheare; Flurry; radu; Colonel_Flagg; Old Sarge; Darkchylde
    
  
   
    
     
      
       
        
         
          
           
            
             
              
               
                
                 
                  
                   The Moor
 
                            
                            
                           
                          
                            A hollow whispering 
on the moor 
and  
shadowy wind tunes 
of your love  
lies forgotten, etched  
inside my empty night 
 bentfeather  
                            
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656
posted on 
11/20/2003 7:21:05 PM PST
by 
Soaring Feather
(I have a sword in my hand. I am a poet bentfeather.)
 
To: bentfeather
    OvercastDark sky, no moon, no stars,
but not without you,
your warmth,
your eyes to light my way.
 
657
posted on 
11/20/2003 7:29:39 PM PST
by 
Old Sarge
(Serving YOU... on Operation Noble Eagle!)
 
To: bentfeather
    Oh, my goodness. You paint a vivid mental picture with your words. :) 
 It appears that you've had the same thoughts I have had from time to time. Believe it or not, that's a comforting thing to know.
 
658
posted on 
11/20/2003 7:42:43 PM PST
by 
Colonel_Flagg
("The difference between a violin and a viola is that a viola burns longer." -- Victor Borge)
 
To: Old Sarge; Colonel_Flagg
    Nice work Sarge.
 Colonel, please join in on the writing. 
 Sarge, met Colonel Flagg
 
  
Cloudy Skies
 like the color of
 your eyes
 moody blue
 without you...
 
659
posted on 
11/20/2003 7:51:31 PM PST
by 
Soaring Feather
(I have a sword in my hand. I am a poet bentfeather.)
 
To: Colonel_Flagg
    Thank You Colonel.
660
posted on 
11/20/2003 7:52:11 PM PST
by 
Soaring Feather
(I have a sword in my hand. I am a poet bentfeather.)
 
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