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Ouroboros Falls
August 6th, 2002
| Sabertooth
Posted on 08/06/2002 6:06:10 PM PDT by Sabertooth
Ouroboros Falls
Tomorrow morn, while berthed in dawn's low stream,
The sea in sight, the end of Earthen woes,
The unsure shore its undulating seam,
A wayward koi chased past my upturned toes
A gliding sphere that brooked the current dream.
So springing soon, I waded as it goes
Past sunken beds of ancient ocean lime,
Past sandbars where the silts of seasons lay,
We snaked beneath old boughs bent over time;
Transcending shades not ored in mortal clay.
Globe, carp and man now swum in solstice clime,
As summoned noon ascends
throughout today.
Like children of the reeds before the flight,
Past yesterday we'll scale through croaking calls.
Our sunset hour borrows dark or light,
The precipice that parallax enthralls.
The waters' broken roar portends our plight
Does folly swoon? We follow up the falls.
In womb-like winter I saw nighttime fell,
As moonlight cycles down its silver rule
Primeval starlight's cast into the dell,
All mirrored in the overflowing pool
A maddened dragon circles in the well,
With tail in mouth
'round wisdom's pearly jewel
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To: shaggy eel; JulieRNR21; okimhere; My back yard
Thanks for your kind words folks... glad you enjoyed it.

To: Sabertooth
Kudos, Sabertooth! Thank you so much for another beautiful poem!
To: Sabertooth
This is not the jpg I'm thinking of Toothie ... because there is a better one to give a visual ... but nothing fits the riverlettes of mind images to match your words ... even if I did find the precise one! Swimmingly delightful! &;-)
To: 2Trievers
Thanks, 2T! How's this one?

To: Sabertooth
You're quite welcome. You did an outstanding job!
To: Sabertooth
It's great ... but not THE one ... a bit too "busy" for my taste. I just got in and I'm beat ... I promise to look tomorrow.
Bon nuit des gens... pêcheur pour mots et toutes choses beau. &;-)
To: Sabertooth
There once was a man from Nantucket...
To: harpseal
Hey Dude! Nice to see ya.
Thanks for the props. Coleridge? Whew!

To: WillaJohns
This poem casts a spell. Are you a witch?
You're too funny...
Sennnnnnnd mmmmmmmmme mmmmmmmmmmoney!

That's witchcraft!
To: Sabertooth
Is this poem about sex? :) LOL. Well done, Mr. Tooth.
To: vikingchick
Is this poem about sex? :)
Ummmmm... do you want it to be?

You women and your trick questions!
To: Sabertooth
We snaked beneath old boughs bent over timeC'mon....let's not be 'koi'. This is clearly a reference to naughty behavior. ha ha ha
To: vikingchick
This is clearly a reference to naughty behavior.
You got me there... I'd forgotten the significance of old boughs and snakes in the Norseland.

To: Sabertooth
Yes, yes Vague like the mist on the fjords. :)
To: Sabertooth
I love your poems Saber!!! Thank you so much for sharing your talents like this.
To: Snow Bunny
Thank you, Bunny. Always good to see a smile on your face!

Especially with those hot pants!
To: Sabertooth
giggle.....thanks
To: Sabertooth
This poem, above all others which you have pinged me to (for which I am eternally grateful), stirs in me a desire to
hear you read your words.
The poem is lovely.
The poet, like his choice words
Shines: pearls in moonglow.
Thank you so much for sharing these treasures.
To: Sabertooth
PS - I had to look up 'parallax.' I am glad I did. ( :
To: Sabertooth
Well done, Sabe! Engaging images and enchanting meter!
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08/07/2002 5:23:53 AM PDT
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Bigg Red
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