[DoodleBob]

JAMES: “The person who took a shot at Reagan was John Hinckley. He was a deeply disturbed and mentally-ill man, who was the brother of Scott Hinckley. Scott Hinckley was close to the Bush family via a connection with Neil Bush. Neil Bush was one of George H.W.’s kids. Through this connection, Bush the senior found someone he could use. And, one thing you spooks in the CIA taught us: Never waste a crazy person.”

You just explained a bigly number of cranks I see ‘round here.

Ok, I broke the rules and reach the chapters.

The story is intriguing. But it takes a long time to get me hooked. That could be me. It could be the story.

I liked how Nancy Hogan’s loyalty melts quickly and she goes off script. I expected her to get executed on her way to Starbucks and the USB drive fall into the hands of Evil-Doers.

Finally, per protocol and Shatner, “sabotage” is spelled and pronounced “ sabatage.”

[Lazamataz]

SABATAJ! lol

Maybe it took you a bit to get hooked, but hopefully you got hooked. I had a much stronger hook in the first write, but it really made zero sense to the rest of the story arc.

I think I have an idea: Tape a piece of crack to each copy. Hook the reader RIGHT in. 😁

[Lazamataz]

The story is intriguing.

And this is only the political-thriller part. Wait until you get to the aliens and their tech.

There is a mike-drop moment or two. 😊