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To: Bigg Red
Honey, you need a crash course in English composition. So many problems with your piece, but I think this one is a true gem: Three eighth-grade boys were notified their sons were being charged by school district officials with sexual harassment for not referring to the student’s requested pronouns of “they” and “them.”

Good catch! This is a piecemeal compilation of news reports, and my faulty reiteration of the story left out "the parents" in "of the three boys were notified their sons were being charged by school district officials with sexual harassment."

At 71 I do tend to miss things when I read them, and I did ask for proof reading. but at least I am providing many reports, with sources. Feel free to correct.

11 posted on 08/30/2023 8:48:07 AM PDT by daniel1212 (As a damned+destitute sinner turn 2 the Lord Jesus who saves souls on His acct + b baptized 2 obey)
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To: daniel1212

Constructive criticism:
Your headline needs to be rewritten, as it does not make sense.

You have cobbled together far to much information, and you have connected the various parts with sentence fragments. The various pieces are difficult to follow.

Perhaps if you presented your main themes and then presented the sources as bullet points, you could achieve some coherence.

Good luck.

PS: I am older than you are.


17 posted on 08/30/2023 2:40:54 PM PDT by Bigg Red (Trump will be sworn in under a shower of confetti made from the tattered remains of the Rat Party.)
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