[Bigg Red]

Constructive criticism:
Your headline needs to be rewritten, as it does not make sense.

You have cobbled together far to much information, and you have connected the various parts with sentence fragments. The various pieces are difficult to follow.

Perhaps if you presented your main themes and then presented the sources as bullet points, you could achieve some coherence.

Good luck.

PS: I am older than you are.

[daniel1212]

Constructive criticism:

Thanks. I am sure I need it.

Your headline needs to be rewritten, as it does not make sense.

Yes, it now reads:

Without any specific explanation and despite appeal, Quora.com itself censors an answer, and thus it examples a reason as to, "Why so many conservatives are bent out of shape about "cancel culture"?"

You have cobbled together far to much information, and you have connected the various parts with sentence fragments. The various pieces are difficult to follow.Perhaps if you presented your main themes and then presented the sources as bullet points, you could achieve some coherence.

I was/am primarily seeking to provide information, not writing an essay. I have made some revisions since and will make more. But I have found that I usually have little problem deciphering confusing writing which other persons expressed bewilderment at. Thus I too much expected others to discern what was meant.