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To: Jamestown1630

Enjambment….

See! There’s the rhyme!

I could write a poem about a leezard who was in the roller derby!

Puff the magic leezard lived in some amber
And frolicked at the roller rink as a jammer

Somehow, we’ve got to insert something about a deer relieving himself in the woods…..

Puff the magic leezard lived in some amber
And frolicked at the roller rink as a jammer
And then he whizzed on an amberlance

I don’t see how they could reject this at The Atlantic.


37 posted on 02/19/2022 9:05:42 PM PST by blueunicorn6 ("A crack shot and a good dancer”)
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To: blueunicorn6

Well, the standards in literature are falling all over :-)


66 posted on 02/20/2022 11:11:41 AM PST by Jamestown1630 ("A Republic, if you can keep it.")
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