Skip to comments.
The Clerk---And Old Sergeant Story
The Silver Star Families of America ^
| 20018
| Steve Newton
Posted on 01/20/2018 7:10:18 PM PST by Steve Newton
Need a little help folks.
A co author has joined the "Old Sergeant" team---Meet Gayle Rae!
She has developed a new character and since the Old Sergeant was practically born on FR I wanted to give you first glimpse and also to get your reaction to her writing.
Tell us what you think. And thank you.
TOPICS: Books/Literature; Chit/Chat; Military/Veterans; Miscellaneous
KEYWORDS: old; sergeant; the; war
Navigation: use the links below to view more comments.
first previous 1-20, 21-40, 41 next last
To: Steve Newton
I’m not familiar with Army protocol — Would a corporal typically address a sergeant as “sir”?
21
posted on
01/20/2018 8:43:57 PM PST
by
Bob
(Damn, the democrats haven't been this upset since Republicans freed their slaves.)
To: Bob
Probably not. But I did. Want me to add you?
22
posted on
01/20/2018 8:46:29 PM PST
by
Steve Newton
(And the Wolves will learn what we have shown before-We love our sheep we dogs of war. Vaughn)
To: Bob
Sorry if that sounded nitpicky. The story is great and written really well.
23
posted on
01/20/2018 8:46:39 PM PST
by
Bob
(Damn, the democrats haven't been this upset since Republicans freed their slaves.)
To: Steve Newton
24
posted on
01/20/2018 8:47:53 PM PST
by
Bob
(Damn, the democrats haven't been this upset since Republicans freed their slaves.)
To: Steve Newton
Well well folks. I’m proud to introduce Gayle Rae——the newest FR member!
25
posted on
01/20/2018 8:49:24 PM PST
by
Steve Newton
(And the Wolves will learn what we have shown before-We love our sheep we dogs of war. Vaughn)
To: Steve Newton
Please add me to your ping list as well
26
posted on
01/20/2018 8:50:02 PM PST
by
krizzy
(Buffalo from NE-IV-219)
To: Bob
27
posted on
01/20/2018 8:50:29 PM PST
by
Steve Newton
(And the Wolves will learn what we have shown before-We love our sheep we dogs of war. Vaughn)
To: Steve Newton
To: krizzy
29
posted on
01/20/2018 8:51:28 PM PST
by
Steve Newton
(And the Wolves will learn what we have shown before-We love our sheep we dogs of war. Vaughn)
To: LesbianThespianGymnasticMidget
30
posted on
01/20/2018 8:53:49 PM PST
by
Steve Newton
(And the Wolves will learn what we have shown before-We love our sheep we dogs of war. Vaughn)
To: Steve Newton
Yep, add me. Seriously though, put some hard scifi into the stories.
To: Steve Newton
thank you. count me in, please ?
32
posted on
01/20/2018 8:58:14 PM PST
by
stylin19a
(Best.Election.of.All-Times.Ever.In.The.History.Of.Ever)
To: LesbianThespianGymnasticMidget
Hummm. I might have a story just for you
33
posted on
01/20/2018 8:58:20 PM PST
by
Steve Newton
(And the Wolves will learn what we have shown before-We love our sheep we dogs of war. Vaughn)
To: stylin19a
34
posted on
01/20/2018 8:59:45 PM PST
by
Steve Newton
(And the Wolves will learn what we have shown before-We love our sheep we dogs of war. Vaughn)
To: Steve Newton
Very good,why is it you only find competent leaders in fiction? Add me to ping list I am intrigued.
35
posted on
01/20/2018 9:00:08 PM PST
by
shoff
(Vote Democrat it beats thinking!)
To: shoff
Hummm. That’s a very good question. I know there are some out there. But a good leader cares more for his men than his own life.
Your added my friend
36
posted on
01/20/2018 9:03:18 PM PST
by
Steve Newton
(And the Wolves will learn what we have shown before-We love our sheep we dogs of war. Vaughn)
To: Steve Newton
37
posted on
01/20/2018 9:35:09 PM PST
by
Liberal Anti Venom
(Freedom exists not to do what you like, but having the right to do what you ought. ~John Paul II~)
To: Liberal Anti Venom
38
posted on
01/20/2018 11:04:41 PM PST
by
Steve Newton
(And the Wolves will learn what we have shown before-We love our sheep we dogs of war. Vaughn)
To: Steve Newton
Hello, Steve, and all the others who responded to this story. This is Gayle Rae, and I would like to take a minute to say “Hi!” and to thank each of you for the encouraging response. I would also like to thank Steve for the opportunity to work with him and the Old Sargent. I look forward to more of the same. :)
To: Steve Newton
Please put me on your ping list.
40
posted on
01/21/2018 7:58:11 AM PST
by
tillacum
(I'm still a Deplorable and I COLLUDED during the election SO THE DONALD could WIN! I voted.)
Navigation: use the links below to view more comments.
first previous 1-20, 21-40, 41 next last
Disclaimer:
Opinions posted on Free Republic are those of the individual
posters and do not necessarily represent the opinion of Free Republic or its
management. All materials posted herein are protected by copyright law and the
exemption for fair use of copyrighted works.
FreeRepublic.com is powered by software copyright 2000-2008 John Robinson