Thanks! I love blowback.
Hmmm, I wonder if I could get Reddit to ban me...
I’m on a second/fifth listen.
Your best so far, hands down.
Love the riffs and the lyrics and would continue working on a few details.
If I may.
Extend the opening riff just a few seconds longer, make them wait for the next/first cut-in. (tease them)
I really like how your tracks are laid. They work very well together.
The vocal track however comes in a little too strong, could be the volume, but given how your music tracks start and build I would like to hear your vocal track do the same. I would consider adding new lyrics on the front end to accommodate the transition.
I don’t mean to be critical since I could never do what you’re doing, but I have the sense that you are actually looking for critical feedback.
And the lastly, the chorus “Welcome to the crazy years” I would intermix an alternate line like, “Welcome to a world of fears” and or as the music builds “We are here for all your fears”.
Just my two cents.