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Why Can’t College Students Write Anymore?
Psychology Today ^ | February 21, 2014 | Azadeh Aalai, Ph.D

Posted on 02/21/2014 5:24:09 PM PST by Zeneta

Why Can’t College Students Write Anymore?

Is it just me, or are student competencies like basic writing skills in serious peril today? Granted, I am about a decade in to my teaching career, but even within this fairly short span, I have noticed a startling decline in the quality of written work turned in by my students, regardless of which institution (community college, private, four year school) the papers are coming from.

It’s not just that students aren’t demonstrating critical thinking skills in their writing, basic competencies like proper syntax, spelling, and even proper structure like paragraph indentation and how to cite sources are being done very poorly. Teachers have been reporting anecdotally that even compared to five years ago, many are seeing declines in vocabulary, grammar, writing, and analysis (e.g. Westin, 2013; Bloomberg News, 2012). Moreover, on an international scale, our standards in literacy is similarly on the decline (McGuire, 2014).

There are only so many times you can correct a “their” that is meant to denote “there” before wondering, when was the last time this college student’s writing abilities were actually assessed? As a psychology professor, I am starting to feel like an English instructor, because so much of my feedback on these papers is focusing on such basic writing skills, that the coherency or theoretical merit behind the content is getting lost in the shuffle.

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TOPICS: Education; History; Science; Society
KEYWORDS: dumbingdown; writing
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To: Zeneta

When I was an assistant at Fordham in 1977, the students were unable to write, or think. The professor I assisted had taken to handing out the answers to his ESSAY questions. That’s right. He wrote essays and gave them out. The students were graded on whether they were able to regurgitate something resembling an essay. Most of them weren’t.

And yet, during the almost 40 years since then, I’ve been reading articles that decry the precipitous decline in student literacy since “five years ago.”

The government schools have been succeeding for over 100 years in turning out illiterates. And they have been getting more and more and more successful all the time.

The “low-information voter” is PRECISELY what Horace Mann, Andrew Carnegie, John Dewey, J.D. Rockefeller, et al., WANTED to produce by imposing government schooling on America.


161 posted on 02/21/2014 11:16:57 PM PST by Arthur McGowan
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To: Arthur McGowan

All mixed up, don’t know what to do.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JjTjtJDZomw


162 posted on 02/21/2014 11:22:34 PM PST by Zeneta (Thoughts in time and out of season.)
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To: daniel1212

And let’s not forget that Holder is currently pressuring schools to not hold minority students to equal behavior standards. Because, of course, doing so is RAAAAACIST.

http://www.thenewamerican.com/culture/education/item/17376-holder-duncan-unveil-race-based-school-discipline-guidelines


163 posted on 02/22/2014 12:05:01 AM PST by FreedomPoster (Islam delenda est)
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To: Zeneta

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164 posted on 02/22/2014 12:05:06 AM PST by Zeneta (Thoughts in time and out of season.)
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To: Theodore R.

The financial inducement is there because the high school degree has become dumbed down to near-worthlessness. The college degree is the new high school degree.

And because of EEOC lawsuits, business effectively cannot use their own testing as a barrier to entry. So, they/we are stuck with using the college degree, and thus the financial inducement.


165 posted on 02/22/2014 12:13:47 AM PST by FreedomPoster (Islam delenda est)
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To: okie01

>> map-reading lessons

There is a skill about to be almost completely lost due to the ubiquitous GPS. And I’ve seen anecdotal indications that even the military isn’t necessarily doing that great of a job teaching it these days.


166 posted on 02/22/2014 12:23:10 AM PST by FreedomPoster (Islam delenda est)
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To: Zeneta

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GOOD NEWS for liberals: Jellyfish have survived for 650 million years without brains.


167 posted on 02/22/2014 1:06:02 AM PST by firebrand
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To: firebrand

Do you Like American music ?

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fgeUwLz_J9E


168 posted on 02/22/2014 1:12:46 AM PST by Zeneta (Thoughts in time and out of season.)
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To: FreedomPoster
There is a skill about to be almost completely lost due to the ubiquitous GPS.

I usually start with the statement: The top of the map is ALWAYS North.

That is a lesson my darlin' wife has yet to grasp, but all three granddaughters have it down pat.

The GPS has probably become a necessary option on a car -- because I don't think they teach geography anymore. I wonder if they even use maps as teaching aids.

Many of the maps published in newspapers or broadcast on TV are totally botched.

169 posted on 02/22/2014 1:13:01 AM PST by okie01 (The Mainstream Media -- IGNORANCE ON PARADE)
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To: Zeneta

Wow. They are spectacularly awful.


170 posted on 02/22/2014 1:40:55 AM PST by firebrand
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To: Zeneta

Kids have to be given good writing to read, not just any old thing. At the first publishing job I had, we used to call books that were competently written with no artistry “linoleum”: they did the job but had no beauty.

Many books that are best-sellers today are linoleum. They are plot-driven, and they keep those pages turning, but there is nothing to marvel at in the prose.

I have to have both when I’m reading for pleasure: Elmore Leonard, John le Carre, the two Amises, others I can’t think of now. In nonfiction, James O’Keefe, Pat Buchanan, the Game Change and Double Down books, Ann Coulter.

The English have an unfair advantage, it being their language. Their education in reading and writing is better, but also the English are clever in the way they speak. They don’t just blurt out any old thing but value wit and good phrasing and succinctness in their daily talk with others. Totally unfair.


171 posted on 02/22/2014 1:56:40 AM PST by firebrand
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To: Zeneta

Several years before the late Allan Bloom published The Closing of the American Mind, he wrote an eye-opening article for National Review documenting and warning about what has come to be known as political correctness at colleges and universities. That was years before the scourge of political correctness completely overran not only our institutions of higher learning but every aspect of our society: government, the workplace, the courts, the media, the military, churches, etc. I would like to find an reread that article someday.


172 posted on 02/22/2014 2:39:02 AM PST by Atticus
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To: Windflier; Oberon; CaptainAmiigaf

My children are 21 and 24. My son graduated from college two years ago; my daughter will graduate in May. Although I did not home-school, I taught them how to write. I made sure that they could create a well-written essay. Attending college here in Liberal Hell (a.k.a. Massachusetts), both of them were often at odds with their professors. My daughter had to write a paper extolling the virtues of single-payer health care. Needless to say, she took the opposite approach. The comments noted on her paper included “this is the best written essay I have read in years although I disagree with almost all your positions”. My son’s feminist English professor had similar comments when he was asked to write about something in his life that profoundly affected him. He wrote about his experiences becoming an Eagle Scout. (Her comments included that the Boy Scouts was a terrible organization and other such drivel. She thought he wrote well about a “bad influence”. But, that is a topic for another day.)

Although I did not exclusively home-school, I supplemented my children’s education. I guess one could call that “semi-home-schooling”.
(Note: I have not had coffee yet. Please ignore any grammar errors. :)


173 posted on 02/22/2014 4:24:27 AM PST by Mrs. B.S. Roberts
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To: Zeneta

Public schools, unions.


174 posted on 02/22/2014 4:30:49 AM PST by AdaGray
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To: Theodore R.

And in addition, 100% of the remainder of student loans are forgiven after 10 years (120 consecutive payments) of gov. or secular non-profit service. Thus fostering liberals predominating in these areas.


175 posted on 02/22/2014 4:52:13 AM PST by daniel1212 (Come to the Lord Jesus as a contrite damned+destitute sinner, trust Him to save you, then live 4 Him)
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To: UCANSEE2

LOL!! Good one.


176 posted on 02/22/2014 6:39:41 AM PST by smalltownslick
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To: Mrs. B.S. Roberts
Her comments included that the Boy Scouts was a terrible organization and other such drivel. She thought he wrote well about a “bad influence”.

Liberalism is truly a mental illness. That woman is profoundly sick.

177 posted on 02/22/2014 7:02:39 AM PST by Windflier (To anger a conservative, tell him a lie. To anger a liberal, tell him the truth.)
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To: Windflier

“Liberalism is truly a mental illness. That woman is profoundly sick.”

She is an English professor. He was a microbiology major and never had to take another class with her.


178 posted on 02/22/2014 7:48:04 AM PST by Mrs. B.S. Roberts
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To: Windflier

Asked a woman in her late 30s if her 10-year-old son was in Boy Scouts. Cutting a glance in his direction, she replied, sotto voce,:”No. They have a bad reputation.”

This is a ubiquitous opinion among young parents, from what I have been able to observe.


179 posted on 02/22/2014 8:56:17 AM PST by reformedliberal
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To: Zeneta

I taught college courses in writing and worked in a writing clinic in the late 90s and early 2000s.

They can’t write because they aren’t taught the basics of grammar before they get to college.

Some fully tenured professors simply overlook the writing component in their grading of papers because so many would fail-—and their own grading by the students wouldnt be very good if that happened. And then there are those who believe that writing in Ebonics is a legitimate language skill.

Writing is a skill which will get worse as illiterate students are graduated with degrees in education as “teachers”


180 posted on 02/22/2014 10:53:48 AM PST by wildbill
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