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The Hobbit Hole XVIII - Though we pass them by today...
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Posted on 12/20/2004 9:01:36 AM PST by ecurbh

Welcome to The Hobbit Hole!

Though we pass them by today...

New verse:

Upon the hearth the fire is red,
Beneath the roof there is a bed;
But not yet weary are our feet,
Still round the corner we may meet
A sudden tree or standing stone
That none have seen but we alone.
Tree and flower and leaf and grass,
Let them pass! Let them pass!
Hill and water under sky,
Pass them by! Pass them by!

Still round the corner there may wait
A new road or a secret gate,
And though we pass them by today,
Tomorrow we may come this way
And take the hidden paths that run
Towards the Moon or to the Sun.
Apple, thorn, and nut and sloe,
Let them go! Let them go!
Sand and stone and pool and dell,
Fare you well! Fare you well!

Home is behind, the world ahead,
And there are many paths to tread
Through shadows to the edge of night,
Until the stars are all alight.
Then world behind and home ahead,
We’ll wander back to home and bed.
Mist and twilight, cloud and shade,
Away shall fade! Away shall fade!
Fire and lamp, and meat and bread,
And then to bed! And then to bed!

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To: RosieCotton

I don't want to post it on line. Let me think it through some more and I might talk about it offline or in chat.


641 posted on 12/22/2004 11:08:05 AM PST by Corin Stormhands (CHRISTmas: One season. One reason.)
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To: RosieCotton

Only in America can a poor black child grow up to be a rich white woman...


642 posted on 12/22/2004 11:08:55 AM PST by Corin Stormhands (CHRISTmas: One season. One reason.)
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To: Corin Stormhands; JenB

Sure!

Hey, Jen...did we still have a Yahoo group for Hobbit Hole writers? One of these days it might be fun to resurrect it, if Yahoo hasn't gotten toooo ad filled.


643 posted on 12/22/2004 11:09:58 AM PST by RosieCotton (He is a very shallow critic who cannot see an eternal rebel in the heart of a conservative. - GKC)
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To: Corin Stormhands

LOL!

That's about what my Mom used to say...that he went from a cute little black kid to a very ugly white woman...


644 posted on 12/22/2004 11:10:48 AM PST by RosieCotton (He is a very shallow critic who cannot see an eternal rebel in the heart of a conservative. - GKC)
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To: RosieCotton; Corin Stormhands

Actually... I'd be up for something like a writing challenge if we could use works in progress. I've got 50k of a story I like to add to...

Course, my dad's going to be published before I am, but that's ok. I've got time.


645 posted on 12/22/2004 11:14:27 AM PST by JenB
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To: All
*clap*squeal*shimmmy*

I just got to hold twins! The cutest wittle brand new, 5 week-old, daaaaahling twins! Coworker brought them in for show-n-tell.

And my SIL is due any day with my first niece!

Life is so good!

646 posted on 12/22/2004 11:15:16 AM PST by Lil'freeper (Error 404. The page you requested was not found.)
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To: JenB; RosieCotton

I'm not so sure I'd want to do a "challenge" as much as have someone motivate me to keep writing. I have several projects "in the works."

I'm hoping over the next week to get them organized and at least have all my work in the same place.


647 posted on 12/22/2004 11:15:40 AM PST by Corin Stormhands (CHRISTmas: One season. One reason.)
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To: JenB
What's your Dad publishing?

I still only have the first chapter of my new story and I'm half thinking of starting over. I like the idea of it, but I'm not sure I like how I'm telling it so far.

Were you gonna send me a link to some of your latest story in progress?

648 posted on 12/22/2004 11:16:00 AM PST by RosieCotton (He is a very shallow critic who cannot see an eternal rebel in the heart of a conservative. - GKC)
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To: Corin Stormhands; JenB
I dunno that I want the pressure of a word count goal or anything like that. Just support and reminders to keep at it.

Heh...I came across a quote from some famous author the other day (can't remember who) that said something like "To become a writer, first write a million words. Burn them. Then start writing."

I have a lonnnnng way to go. ;-) But I'm at what, about 200,000 now? About that, if I only count stuff from after the age of 15 or so. It's a start!

649 posted on 12/22/2004 11:19:04 AM PST by RosieCotton (He is a very shallow critic who cannot see an eternal rebel in the heart of a conservative. - GKC)
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To: RosieCotton

Oh, I still have to finish off one chapter to get it to sort of halfway done, then I'll send it. Haven't done much writing lately for some reason...

Dad wrote a piece of Christian literature that looks like it has an excellent chance of getting published. I'll tell you when it comes out ;-)

Go ahead and send me whatever you like, when you like.


650 posted on 12/22/2004 11:23:40 AM PST by JenB
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To: Corin Stormhands

You have every right to be concerned! He needs to realize that he's been given a "gift'and should listen to his doctor. Overdoing it too soon could cause the screws to fail, leading to another operation and a longer recuperation. Good luck to your mom in keeping him "in line"!


651 posted on 12/22/2004 11:23:44 AM PST by LSAggie
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To: LSAggie

My step-dad rarely listens to anyone. I'm afraid he'll start feeling better and want to get back to work at the store.

Lord knows, he doesn't need the money. He just ~needs~ it.


652 posted on 12/22/2004 11:26:29 AM PST by Corin Stormhands (CHRISTmas: One season. One reason.)
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To: JenB

I may send you the first chapter of this story along with a synopsis. It's a bit sappy for me, but perhaps that means I need practice with that...

Heh...I told one of the bothers that I'd like to at least start TRYING to get published before I'm 30. That's almost two years. He said "isn't that awfully soon?"

I barely refrained myself from slapping him silly.


653 posted on 12/22/2004 11:27:34 AM PST by RosieCotton (He is a very shallow critic who cannot see an eternal rebel in the heart of a conservative. - GKC)
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To: RosieCotton

Send it along... and slap the bother!


654 posted on 12/22/2004 11:33:41 AM PST by JenB
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To: JenB

Ooh...according to Fed-Ex, Teresa's book should be delivered today - the printed copy.

Hope it's at least sort of presentable, in spite of my formatting errors and general stupidity. ;-)


655 posted on 12/22/2004 11:34:05 AM PST by RosieCotton (He is a very shallow critic who cannot see an eternal rebel in the heart of a conservative. - GKC)
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To: RosieCotton

Ooh, excellent!


656 posted on 12/22/2004 11:35:56 AM PST by JenB
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To: JenB

It's a little silly on my part since it's really just a fancy version of a rough draft manuscript...but I'm really excited! Can't wait to actually hold it.


657 posted on 12/22/2004 11:38:41 AM PST by RosieCotton (He is a very shallow critic who cannot see an eternal rebel in the heart of a conservative. - GKC)
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To: RosieCotton

All right, it's going to take forever for me to get this chapter right but I'll send the others, they work pretty well even without. Email ok?


658 posted on 12/22/2004 11:39:48 AM PST by JenB
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To: JenB

Yep!

And I may send you what I have when I get home. I forgot my USB drive again...

There's a major element in this chapter I think I should cut out...but maybe I should have you read it before I ask whether it's too hokey or creepy or not.


659 posted on 12/22/2004 11:41:12 AM PST by RosieCotton (He is a very shallow critic who cannot see an eternal rebel in the heart of a conservative. - GKC)
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To: Alkhin
��5{��������hat your husband lets you read it out loud!

Yeah, but I'm good. ;-) Actually, I used to record books for the blind for the state, so I've had lots of practice.

My husband is not a reader. (No, I don't count the bathroom as a reading room.) So, I realized if I want to share books with him, this is the only way to do it. It's also great for passing time on road trips.

660 posted on 12/22/2004 11:43:28 AM PST by stands2reason
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