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To: RosieCotton

(Did you read chapter one, then?)

I'm up to chapter 5 so I'll definitely get more up today or tomorrow.

Let's see. You need a plot infusion. Could someone... leave a baby on her doorstep, or a friend get falsely accused of embezzling, or something?


1,504 posted on 11/12/2004 8:57:08 AM PST by JenB
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To: JenB
Let's see. You need a plot infusion. Could someone... leave a baby on her doorstep, or a friend get falsely accused of embezzling, or something?

Heh...those are a bit dramatic. But something like that, I guess! Either that or I just skip ahead...it's a journal, after all. Rather than drag things out day by day, I could have her not write for a month or so and then do a lot of catching up. Maybe.

I thought about having her car break down and the nice guy coming to the rescue, but I've already had a lot of coincidences happen in the last few days of her life...too many already. Couldn't add yet another without it being nothing short of ridiculous.

Yes, I finished chapter one of your story...

1,508 posted on 11/12/2004 9:15:22 AM PST by RosieCotton (He is a very shallow critic who cannot see an eternal rebel in the heart of a conservative. - GKC)
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