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The Hobbit Hole XVII - A new road or a secret gate...
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Posted on 11/03/2004 6:16:42 PM PST by HairOfTheDog

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To: JenB

I think it's mostly a formatting issue. I found a list of formatting tips on a self-publishing site and I'm workin' on cleaning up unnecessary spaces and such.

In other words...avoiding the next scene. But oh well.


7,861 posted on 12/15/2004 10:31:22 AM PST by RosieCotton (He is a very shallow critic who cannot see an eternal rebel in the heart of a conservative. - GKC)
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To: RosieCotton

Oh well indeed!

I ought to study a lot tonight but maybe I can write a thousand words or so.


7,862 posted on 12/15/2004 10:34:20 AM PST by JenB (I will not turn into a snake. It doesn't help.)
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To: JenB

Wow, that one kilt it good.


7,863 posted on 12/15/2004 12:03:57 PM PST by TalonDJ
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To: TalonDJ

So did yours. ;-)


7,864 posted on 12/15/2004 12:28:07 PM PST by RosieCotton (He is a very shallow critic who cannot see an eternal rebel in the heart of a conservative. - GKC)
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To: JenB

After much formatting (I'm almost done - whew!), I have it down to 270 pages. It'll still be close to three hundred when done, but it's better than it was.

Ungh. I've been staring at it so long the font in any any program looks funny.


7,865 posted on 12/15/2004 12:32:25 PM PST by RosieCotton (He is a very shallow critic who cannot see an eternal rebel in the heart of a conservative. - GKC)
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To: RosieCotton
Any other program.
7,866 posted on 12/15/2004 12:34:34 PM PST by RosieCotton (He is a very shallow critic who cannot see an eternal rebel in the heart of a conservative. - GKC)
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To: RosieCotton

Heh... yeah... I had to change the font and stuff to my default for editing. I can't think writing except in Times New Roman, size 11, line-and-a-half spacing.


7,867 posted on 12/15/2004 12:41:14 PM PST by JenB (I will not turn into a snake. It doesn't help.)
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To: JenB

I do have line and a half and 11 font...but not Times New Roman. It bothers me for some reason.

Guess I just HAVE to be different!

But the main thing I've changed is doing indents at the start of paragraphs and not putting spaces between related paragraphs. That's what the page I found said to do for publishing, and it does look better. Took a lotta work, though!

I also added a bunch more chapter names and all that. I'd gotten lazy with that after the first few chapters.


7,868 posted on 12/15/2004 12:44:20 PM PST by RosieCotton (He is a very shallow critic who cannot see an eternal rebel in the heart of a conservative. - GKC)
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To: RosieCotton

Actually, in general don't put spaces between paragraphs in the same scene. Then you can use "white space" as a visual cue, instead of lines. It looks a little neater, anyway.


7,869 posted on 12/15/2004 12:56:37 PM PST by JenB (I will not turn into a snake. It doesn't help.)
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To: JenB

Right, that's what I mean. Just didn't put it right.

I had spaces between all paragraphs. I've removed them now.


7,870 posted on 12/15/2004 12:59:19 PM PST by RosieCotton (He is a very shallow critic who cannot see an eternal rebel in the heart of a conservative. - GKC)
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Headin' home! Be back in here later!


7,871 posted on 12/15/2004 1:05:41 PM PST by RosieCotton (He is a very shallow critic who cannot see an eternal rebel in the heart of a conservative. - GKC)
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To: RosieCotton

That's good! It'll make for easier reading, too.

They have just arrived at the Goblin City...


7,872 posted on 12/15/2004 1:05:58 PM PST by JenB (I will not turn into a snake. It doesn't help.)
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To: JenB; RosieCotton; SuziQ; Sam Cree; 2Jedismom; HairOfTheDog; ecurbh; Professional Engineer; ...
Q$%@#$^@#$%@#$T contacts! I can't get the right one out. Gotta try again in a few.

After the meetin' went to buy me some popcorn

It's cold here. I think it's up to 35 now. That's unseasonably cold for us in December.

7,873 posted on 12/15/2004 1:20:05 PM PST by Corin Stormhands (CHRISTmas: One season. One reason.)
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To: HairOfTheDog
So did you start your viewing of it tonight? Or did ya doze off?

Neither of the above. Although if I had brought in my DVD/USB drive, I probably could have watched it at work last night. Things were that slow.

I hope to block out some time on Sunday for watching. Oh, and spoilers don't bother me.

7,874 posted on 12/15/2004 1:32:23 PM PST by 300winmag (FR's Hobbit Hole supports America's troops)
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To: RosieCotton

Will you be posting the drawings?


7,875 posted on 12/15/2004 3:25:21 PM PST by Sam Cree (Democrats are herd animals)
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To: Corin Stormhands

Try putting some drops in first. They can get awfully sticky when the air is dry.


7,876 posted on 12/15/2004 3:29:53 PM PST by Overtaxed
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To: Sam Cree

I can! If he finishes. He keeps saying they aren't good enough, but the one I HAVE seen was very nice. Pencil sketches - they work well, I think!


7,877 posted on 12/15/2004 3:36:39 PM PST by RosieCotton (He is a very shallow critic who cannot see an eternal rebel in the heart of a conservative. - GKC)
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To: JenB
"I can't think writing except in Times New Roman"

The Roman typefaces are the easiest for Westerners to read, New Times Roman is a good one, IMO, but the Caslons are the classics.

The Roman letter form is one of the oldest, as well as one of the most beautiful letters we have. Newer ones, like Helvetica and Ariel are nice and crisp, except for that very institutional look they have. Which is why hospitals and government centers love them so. Kind of like green paint.

7,878 posted on 12/15/2004 3:41:09 PM PST by Sam Cree (Democrats are herd animals)
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To: Overtaxed

Corin's too embarrassed to admit that he figured out it was already out...eye was so irritated it felt like it was still in.

~ sigh ~

Day Two.

Corin 3
Contacts 1


7,879 posted on 12/15/2004 3:57:47 PM PST by Corin Stormhands (CHRISTmas: One season. One reason.)
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To: Corin Stormhands
eye was so irritated it felt like it was still in.

Heh....I've done that before.

7,880 posted on 12/15/2004 4:03:12 PM PST by Overtaxed
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