To: Sequoyah101; lee martell; Bigg Red; Jane Long
...he just took one look at me and he knew; I'm about to lose my wife," said Gena Norris.I read that as Norris' wife relating what she felt Norris himself was thinking when he "took one look" at her. Perhaps if there were single quotes around 'I'm about to lose my wife'...?
33 posted on
06/10/2017 7:57:50 AM PDT by
jim macomber
("Bargained for Exchange" "Art & Part" "A Grave Breach" "Sovereign Order " - www.jamesmacomber.com)
To: jim macomber
I agree. It may be slightly flawed on the page, but I think you correctly see what was intended to be conveyed.
To: jim macomber
You are probably correct. But a professional writer should compose a piece in such a way that the reader is not left to speculate about what he means.
56 posted on
06/10/2017 11:09:10 AM PDT by
Bigg Red
(Vacate the chair! Ryan must go.)
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