This isn’t necessarily pointed at you, so please don’t kill the messenger...
“Rojas told Eater the fight started a basket of $5 tortilla chips and a choice of salsa – red or green.”
The fight started a $5 basket of chips did it? How could the fight start anything.
I think the fight started OVER the basket of chips, etc...
I see a lot of dropped verbs / adverbs /prepositions in stories and posts lately. Lazy cliquey culture is to blame IMHO. This is just like “because this or that” vs. because OF this or that.
What you talking about?
I think the fight started between the blonde in the white dress and the hispanic in the blue shorts and red top. I think they had words that eventually got the studs involved and it came to chair slinging.
I didn’t see a single well landed punch
Whenever I don my cape as grammar nazi, I use private reply.
;^)
Agreed.
Come on now. Get with the twitter culture. You are only allowed 140 characters so dropping of verbs and such is acceptable. :-)