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Another Old Sergeant Story
http://steven.newton1.home.att.net/ ^ | 2006 | Steve Newton

Posted on 10/31/2006 4:33:39 PM PST by Steve Newton

The Soldier left the States under circumstances that made his mind shut down every time he thought of it. When his wife found out that he was going to be deployed she had left him taking their two children. Being an orphan they were all the family he had and the thought of them not being there when he returned home was crushing.

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STILL ON THE LINE

The Soldier left the States under circumstances that made his mind shut down every time he thought of it. When his wife found out that he was going to be deployed she had left him taking their two children. Being an orphan they were all the family he had and the thought of them not being there when he returned home was crushing.

She had taken everything they owned and moved out of base housing leaving him nothing. He did not begrudge her anything because he wanted what was best for his children. She had said that he would be an “absentee father” and that the children deserved better. He could find no argument against what she had said.

When he arrived in Iraq he was assigned to a close knit platoon and even here he did not fit in. He had never felt so alone in his life. He did his job and was good at it but no one reached out to him. No one cared. No one ate with him and few spoke to him.

After he was in country for several months he still had received no mail. He had written his wife and children everyday but no letter ever came for him. He would stand on the outer edge of the crowd of soldiers waiting for his name to be called. And when it wasn’t he would turn and leave: the emptiness growing inside. No friends and no family.

He walked the fence line guarding the compound while the stars shone above. Hot in the day time and sometimes very cold at night he continued his duty. Up and down the line. Checking and watching, always on the alert for the enemy.

His boots made indentations in the sand and it took him an hour to walk the whole fence line. Sometimes when the wind was not blowing he would walk in his own foot steps.

He wondered about other men and women throughout the world who were walking the line by themselves, cold and lonely.

A lonely sailor on a ship during midwatch; a marine pulling fire watch; an Air force grunt guarding a plane in the cold and rain; a coast guardsman lying in his bunk and crying.

He wondered what they were thinking and how they felt inside. He would never know because he didn’t even know how he felt. Just----an emptiness. Just a job to do that he would do no matter what. He had nothing else.

One foot in front of the other as the months pasted. The soles of his boots wore down to paper thinness and still he walked. Still he watched, guarding his fellow Soldiers from harm.

Sometimes he prayed that it would end with a bullet from a terrorist rifle or a bomb placed along the wire. But it never happened. The line was endless. And so it seemed was the pain of his life.

Another set of boots and the line continued. Sometimes his stomach would growl at him and he looked at this with amusement. Food meant little to him anymore and he ate as he worked. One fork full at a time, one step at a time: just walking the line.

For the first several months he had thought of all the things he had done wrong and how he could get his family back. But now he thought of nothing. He just watched. And walked.

One day an officer came to him and asked if he wanted to reenlist and do another tour in Iraq. He had signed the forms without a word. Another year. More line to walk.

He received his first mail just at the start of his second tour. It was his divorce papers. He tossed them on the ground and went back to the line.

One night as he was patrolling the fence he heard a voice out of the darkness:

“Hey kid. Mind if I walk with ya a minute?”

Startled the kid jumped, scared to death until he recognized the huge form of the old sergeant coming out of the darkness.

“Uh, hi Pappy. Of course,” the kid stammered. He had rarely talked with the old sergeant.

“Kid, I know about your personal problems. In fact the Padre and I even discussed sending you home a time or two. But we agreed that the best thing for you would be to walk off your problems and leave you alone.”

“Son, I’m not much good at this. I usually leave talking about the Big Boss up to the Padre. But you have to know that you are NEVER alone kid.”

“Yes. I know you don’t believe me. But turn around and look at your footprints. You see yours? Well can you tell me whose footprints those are next to yours?”

The Soldier turned on his flashlight and sure enough beside his footprints was another set walking right beside his. They were bare feet.

“Sergeant! Was that -------? I mean ---- is that the Lord?”

“I don’t know kid. Why don’t you ask Him?” The old sergeant patted the kid on the back and walked off.

The next evening the old sergeant watched as the kid started walking the fence line.

He smiled when he saw the grin on the kid's face. He may still be on the line but he would never be alone.

Steve Newton steven.newton1@att.net Copyright 2006

Or go here for the full version: http://www.silverstarfamilies.org/StillOnTheLine.html

1 posted on 10/31/2006 4:33:40 PM PST by Steve Newton
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To: Steve Newton

All Old Sergeant stories are fictional

S


2 posted on 10/31/2006 4:37:43 PM PST by Steve Newton
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To: Steve Newton; Brucifer
All Old Sergeant stories are fictional

So was 'To Kill a Mockingbird'. Good story. If you wrote this I'm a fan. If you didn't I'm a fan of whoever did. Thank you for posting it.
3 posted on 10/31/2006 4:47:34 PM PST by Liberty Valance (Keep a simple manner for a happy life)
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To: Liberty Valance

Guilty as charged Sir.

Glad you liked it.

Steve Newton


4 posted on 10/31/2006 4:54:25 PM PST by Steve Newton
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To: Steve Newton; SandRat; Richard Kimball; MarineDad; MoJo2001

Keep up the great work and Thank You for your Service.


5 posted on 10/31/2006 5:00:42 PM PST by Liberty Valance (Keep a simple manner for a happy life)
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To: Liberty Valance; 2LT Radix jr; 68-69TonkinGulfYachtClub; 80 Square Miles; 359Henrie; acad1228; ...

Thanks for the ping Liberty Valance!

Canteen Ping--Enjoy!

Thank you Steve Newton!


6 posted on 10/31/2006 5:01:58 PM PST by MoJo2001
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To: MoJo2001

You are most welcome

God bless our kids that are serving.

Steve


7 posted on 10/31/2006 5:04:36 PM PST by Steve Newton
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To: Liberty Valance

Keep up the great work and Thank You for your Service.


Ditto.


8 posted on 10/31/2006 5:05:55 PM PST by PeterPrinciple (Seeking the Truth here Folks.)
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To: PeterPrinciple

Thank you

And thank all of you for what you do and what you have done.

Kerry does'nt know everthing.

In fact, right at this moment I think the Old Sergeant would love to have a "talk" with him.

S


9 posted on 10/31/2006 5:11:47 PM PST by Steve Newton
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To: Steve Newton

Bump.


10 posted on 10/31/2006 5:36:06 PM PST by Jet Jaguar
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To: Steve Newton
Still on the line.



God Bless Them All.
11 posted on 10/31/2006 6:05:13 PM PST by Liberty Valance (Keep a simple manner for a happy life)
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To: MoJo2001

BTTT


12 posted on 11/01/2006 3:00:53 AM PST by E.G.C.
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To: Liberty Valance

Outstanding pic

Thank you

Steve


13 posted on 11/01/2006 8:03:14 AM PST by Steve Newton
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To: Steve Newton; MoJo2001

Thanks, Steve.....great "story"....we must never forget the sacrifices of our soldiers.


14 posted on 11/02/2006 10:50:12 AM PST by Kathy in Alaska (~ God Bless and Protect Our Brave Protectors of Freedom~)
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To: Kathy in Alaska

Kathy

Your very welcome and I'm glad you liked it!

Stay war and stay safe.

God bless

Steve


15 posted on 11/02/2006 11:40:42 AM PST by Steve Newton
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To: Steve Newton

That should be stay WARM!

Sorry

S


16 posted on 11/02/2006 11:42:05 AM PST by Steve Newton
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